Help me with my English, please.
Jan 23rd 2009 19:39
Dear Miss
Thank you for coming and seeing us at Onoda-shi, in Yamaguchi on Juniary 21. My students were very glad to meet you.
One mother said your reading of picture book was so wanderful!! Your reading was so cheerfull and extensive.
One children said He want to ask a question and He would like to talk to you more!
I apologize for rushing you. How was ramen?
That ramen shop was very popular .
Nice talking with you in my car.
One day, I'd like to visit India.
Thank you for your time and hopefully I will see you again.
Have a nice stay in Japan!!
Sincerely,
Thank you for coming and seeing us at Onoda-shi, in Yamaguchi on Juniary 21. My students were very glad to meet you.
One mother said your reading of picture book was so wanderful!! Your reading was so cheerfull and extensive.
One children said He want to ask a question and He would like to talk to you more!
I apologize for rushing you. How was ramen?
That ramen shop was very popular .
Nice talking with you in my car.
One day, I'd like to visit India.
Thank you for your time and hopefully I will see you again.
Have a nice stay in Japan!!
Sincerely,
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Thank you for coming and visiting us at Onoda-shi, in Yamaguchi on January 21.
A mother said that your picture book reading was so wonderful!!
A boy said that he wanted to ask a question and he would like to talk to you more!
I enjoyed chatting with you while we're riding on my car.
I just think that 'visiting' will sound more like he/she was your guess, but 'seeing' is like staring, just didn't sound good to my ears ^^
You couldn't say 'one' as an antecedent of 'children', because 'children' is plural.
Hope you can fully understand my points, sorry if there were any mistake ^^
Thank you for coming and seeing us at Onoda-shi, in Yamaguchi on January 21.
One mother said your reading of the picture book was so wonderful!!
Your reading was so cheerfull and extensive expressive (?).
One children said he wanted to ask a questions and he would like to talk to you more!
How was the ramen?
That ramen shop is very popular .
It was nice talking with you in my car.
Hope i have helped!