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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Jenny's latest journal entries Jan 03rd 2010 11:45
Dealing in mind the circumstances I trust you will kindly waive any fines that may have accumulated.

While a potential source of revenue for police, the public is not convinced that police should be paid according to the number of fines they hand out.
Jan 04th 2010 23:34 Delirium's Brother

  • fine
  • Fine

 

  • Dealing in mind the circumstances I trust you will kindly waive any fines that may have accumulated.
  • Keeping in mind the circumstances, I trust you will kindly waive any fines that may have accumulated.

 

  • While a potential source of revenue for police, the public is not convinced that police should be paid according to the number of fines they hand out.
  • While a potential source of revenue for the police, the public is not convinced that the police should be paid according to the number of fines they hand out.

 
The second sentence is perfectly fine the way you wrote it, but adding "the" where I did sounds more natural in my dialect of English.

Capitalize the key words of all titles.
Jan 04th 2010 23:34 Delirium's Brother

And the first word of the title, too.

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