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train history in my town

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of JIJI's latest journal entries Jul 03rd 2011 19:46
A further reformation was done in respect of traffic.

What relied on foot or the wagon was advanced with steady steps.

In 1915, Railways were built and wagons ran on the railways.

In 1918, Steam locomotive trains started.

In1925, Electric trains started.



※ Could you correct good sentence?
Jul 03rd 2011 20:02 austex

  • A further reformation was done in respect of traffic.
  • A further reformation was done in respect to traffic.

 

  • What relied on foot or the wagon was advanced with steady steps.
  • What had before been reliant on feet or the wagon was now being advanced with steady steps.

 

  • In 1915, Railways were built and wagons ran on the railways.
  • In 1915, railways were built and wagons began to run on the railways.

 

  • In 1918, Steam locomotive trains started.
  • In 1918, steam locomotive trains were introduced.

 

  • In1925, Electric trains started.
  • And in 1925, electric trains began to be used.

 
Jul 05th 2011 14:07 JIJI
>austexさん
Thank you so much!!
Jul 05th 2011 14:12 austex
You're welcome! Let me know if you need any more help!

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