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Oct 19th 2011 05:56
I transferred to the far office on the beginning of this month. I have been commuting from home. It takes more than about one and a half hours to get the new office. After one week commuting, I decide to live alone near the new office and apart from my family. I will come home every weekend. It is better for me to work efficiently and to be safe while commuting. We feel lonely, but I can come home every weekend with only one-half hour driving.
Lei
Thank you for your correction!
Oct 19th 2011 06:06
  • I transferred to the far office on the beginning of this month.

  • I recently transferred to an office further away from home. (This sounds more natural).

 
  • It takes more than about one and a half hours to get the new office.

  • It takes more than about an hour and a half to get the new office.

 
  • After one week commuting, I decide to live alone near the new office and apart from my family.

  • After one week of commuting, I decided to live alone near the new office and apart from my family.

 
  • I will come home every weekend.

  • However, I will come home every weekend.

 
  • We feel lonely, but I can come home every weekend with only one-half hour driving.

  • We feel lonely, but I can come home every weekend with only half an hour of driving.

 
Good job! Good luck living alone. At least it's more convenient!
Oct 20th 2011 05:54 Kazuki
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