pride and prejudice
I take the class of English literature at the university.
I tried to write about "Pride and Prejudice".
This novel is easy to reading, but the change in characters' emotion is very complex.
please correct it!!
Darcy and Elizabeth are different from in a lot of points.
At first, Darcy has the wealthy owner of the famous superior estate Pemberley in Derbyshire. And he has an income of ten thousand pounds a year. Moreover, he is a distinguished family from old, and has the earl family and the affinity. On the other hand, Elizabeth has her relative of the middle class, and the annual income is about 2000 pounds.
Second, Darcy seems to have sent silver spoons in mouths considerably as understood from his annual income and the luxurious domicile of Pemberley. And most of his relatives and friends are affluent and high position. Moreover, he also says that it was spoilt from parents because he was the only child for a long time. Elizabeth has parents and four sisters. Her elder sister, Jane is so beautiful and tenders of heart, but her father is Peace-at-any-price principle and her mother and her three younger sister are lack of good manners.
Finally, Darcy looks attractive first because of fine tall form and noble face, but his poor affability cause a general disgust which end his popularity. And he sees through person's fault at once because he is smart. Elizabeth is intelligent, lively, attractive, and witty, with her faults being a tendency to judge on first impressions and perhaps being a little selective of the evidence she uses to base her judgments upon.
Darcy is proud of himself naturally by the influence of his position, living, and surrounding people. Because of which and his character, he has pride of him. Elizabeth doesn't feel dissatisfied too much in her position and living. Actually, it seems that she is affluent one at the people. However, she is ashamed of my younger sister and mother's lack of common senses. It is one side, and she has pride, "I am different from them". Darcy’s pride and Elizabeth’s pride cause a misunderstanding.
At their first meeting, Elizabeth think that Darcy is proud man because he danced only twice with his acquaintance, refused to be introduced to any other lady, and spent the rest of the evening walking around the room. But Darcy only behaved as he thought. He never speaks much except among people he knows well. He did not think it to be bad, and acted honestly to himself. But this “honest” is a cause of his pride.
On the other hand, Darcy had at first hardly admitted her to be pretty, and they next met, he looked at her only to criticize. But he had no sooner decided that no single part of her face was particularly attractive than he began to find that whole was made uncommonly “intelligent” by the beautiful expression of her dark eyes.
I tried to write about "Pride and Prejudice".
This novel is easy to reading, but the change in characters' emotion is very complex.
please correct it!!
Darcy and Elizabeth are different from in a lot of points.
At first, Darcy has the wealthy owner of the famous superior estate Pemberley in Derbyshire. And he has an income of ten thousand pounds a year. Moreover, he is a distinguished family from old, and has the earl family and the affinity. On the other hand, Elizabeth has her relative of the middle class, and the annual income is about 2000 pounds.
Second, Darcy seems to have sent silver spoons in mouths considerably as understood from his annual income and the luxurious domicile of Pemberley. And most of his relatives and friends are affluent and high position. Moreover, he also says that it was spoilt from parents because he was the only child for a long time. Elizabeth has parents and four sisters. Her elder sister, Jane is so beautiful and tenders of heart, but her father is Peace-at-any-price principle and her mother and her three younger sister are lack of good manners.
Finally, Darcy looks attractive first because of fine tall form and noble face, but his poor affability cause a general disgust which end his popularity. And he sees through person's fault at once because he is smart. Elizabeth is intelligent, lively, attractive, and witty, with her faults being a tendency to judge on first impressions and perhaps being a little selective of the evidence she uses to base her judgments upon.
Darcy is proud of himself naturally by the influence of his position, living, and surrounding people. Because of which and his character, he has pride of him. Elizabeth doesn't feel dissatisfied too much in her position and living. Actually, it seems that she is affluent one at the people. However, she is ashamed of my younger sister and mother's lack of common senses. It is one side, and she has pride, "I am different from them". Darcy’s pride and Elizabeth’s pride cause a misunderstanding.
At their first meeting, Elizabeth think that Darcy is proud man because he danced only twice with his acquaintance, refused to be introduced to any other lady, and spent the rest of the evening walking around the room. But Darcy only behaved as he thought. He never speaks much except among people he knows well. He did not think it to be bad, and acted honestly to himself. But this “honest” is a cause of his pride.
On the other hand, Darcy had at first hardly admitted her to be pretty, and they next met, he looked at her only to criticize. But he had no sooner decided that no single part of her face was particularly attractive than he began to find that whole was made uncommonly “intelligent” by the beautiful expression of her dark eyes.
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I take the class of an English literature class at the university.
This novel is easy to reading, but the change in the characters' emotion is very complex.
Darcy and Elizabeth are different from in a lot of points ways.
At first, Darcy has is the wealthy owner of the famous superior estate, Pemberley, in Derbyshire.
Moreover, he is from a distinguished family from old, and has the earl family and the affinity. (This second part doesn't make much sense and I don't know how to correct this part, because i haven't read the book. Sorry!)
On the other hand, Elizabeth has her relative and her family are of the middle class, and their annual income is about 2000 pounds.
Second, Darcy seems to have been born with a sent silver spoons in his mouth. Considering as understood from his annual income and his the luxurious domicile, of Pemberley.
And Most of his relatives and friends are affluent and high position.
Moreover, he also says that it he was spoiled by from his parents because he was the only child for a long time.
Elizabeth (lives with her is better) has parents and four sisters.
Her elder sister, Jane is so beautiful and tender of heart, but her father is has a peace-at-any-price principle and her mother and her three younger sisters are lack of good manners.
Finally, At first Darcy looks attractive first because of his fine, tall form and noble face, but his poor affability causes a general disgust which ends his popularity.
And He can immediately see through person's people's faults at once because he is smart.
Elizabeth is intelligent, lively, attractive, and witty. with Her faults being a include a tendency to judge on first impressions and perhaps being a little selective of the evidence she uses to base her judgments upon.
Darcy takes pride in is proud of himself naturally by the influence of his position, living (I think you mean his lifestyle), and surrounding people the people he surrounds himself with.
Because of which and his character, he has pride of him.
Elizabeth doesn't feel too dissatisfied too much in her position and living.
Actually, she seems affluent to many people. it seems that she is affluent one at the people.
However, she is ashamed of my her younger sisters and her mother's lack of common sense.
It is one sided, and she has pride when she thinks "I am different from them".
At their first meeting, Elizabeth thinks that Darcy is proud man because he danced only twice with his acquaintance, refused to be introduced to any other lady, and spent the rest of the evening walking around the room.
But Darcy only behaved as he thought was proper.
He honestly did not think it to be was bad, and acted honestly to himself.
But this “honest” is a cause sign of his pride.
On the other hand, Meanwhile, Darcy had at first hardly admitted her that Elizabeth was to be pretty. And the next time they met, he looked at her and only to criticized.
But he had no sooner had he decided that no single part of her face was particularly attractive than he began to find that whole was made uncommonly “intelligent” by the beautiful expression of in her dark eyes.
Most of your English was good but I can see that you wrote the essay like you wanted to compare and contrast Darcy and Elizabeth in several different ways -- however, your sentences did not do this exactly. So, I think that it's not necessary to have "first." "second," "finally," etc. Good work!
Your correction is very easy to understand^^
And you corrct my essay very carefully.
You are very kind!
This story is very interesting. Please read it^^