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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Serendipity's latest journal entries Feb 24th 2010 18:46
This is an exercise of my English Student's book. I've decided to make here all my writting exercises. I'm sorry if this one is too long!

Importance of mobile phones for Young people:

I am surprised with the dependence of young people with mobile phones. I can see it very clearly in my fifteen years old cousin. She is always with her mobile, listening music, making photos, tipping messages and …do you have any word for when you call someone but you put down before they can answer? In Spain it is called “toque” (touch?) or “perdida/llamada perdida” (lost call?).
Of course, she hasn’t got good marks in her classes, because she is more worried by having a beautiful mobile with the last music, knowing what her friend is doing at the moment, and how she looks like when she makes a photo with her mobile camera in front of the mirror to upload it to a social network. And, when I ask her why she does that such things, she always answers me: Because everybody does it!
Moreover, I can see that young people feel isolated if they don’t have a mobile phone to keep in touch with other people. That’s a pity! I remember when I hadn’t got a mobile and my friends and I went to look up to each other to our houses. That was true relationships!
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How do you mobile phones will change in the next 5 years?

First mobiles where very big, then every company tried to make smaller mobile phones, so now you can find very small and slim ones.
However, with new mobiles there is a trend toward make them with a big touch screen and with a powerful OS that permits you install a lot of applications. Also, if you have programming knowledge, you can develop your own application for your mobile. Moreover, you are always connected to the Internet.
In order to this tendency, I think in the next years we’ll have a mix between computers and mobile phones. They will be a touch screen, bigger than the ones we have now, and they won’t only permit us to make calls or send messages, they will be our camera and our “mini-pc”.
It could be funny, but I’m not very interested in the new mobile phones technologies, and I am a telecommunications engineer. However, I always prefer a smaller one with few gadgets because I only use it for make very few calls or send some messages.
Feb 25th 2010 02:09 no llora <3

  • This is an exercise of my English Student's book.
  • This is an exercise from my English Student's book.

 

  • I've decided to make here all my writting exercises.
  • I've decided to do all my writing exercises here.

 

  • Importance of mobile phones for Young people:
  • Importance of mobile phones for young people:

 

  • I am surprised with the dependence of young people with mobile phones.
  • I am surprised by the dependence of young people on mobile phones.

 

  • I can see it very clearly in my fifteen years old cousin.
  • I can see it very clearly in my fifteen-year-old cousin.

 

  • She is always with her mobile, listening music, making photos, tipping messages and …do you have any word for when you call someone but you put down before they can answer?
  • She is always on her mobile phone (or "cell" for short), listening to music, taking photos, texting (?) messages and …do you have any word for when you call someone but you hang up before they can answer?

 

  • In Spain it is called “toque” (touch?) or “perdida/llamada perdida” (lost call?).
  • In Spain it is called “toque” (touch?) or “perdida/llamada perdida” (lost call?). I think "llamada perdida" would translate to "missed call" in English.

 

  • Of course, she hasn’t got good marks in her classes, because she is more worried by having a beautiful mobile with the last music, knowing what her friend is doing at the moment, and how she looks like when she makes a photo with her mobile camera in front of the mirror to upload it to a social network.
  • Of course, she hasn’t gotten good marks in her classes, because she is more worried about having a beautiful mobile phonewith the latest music, knowing what her friend is doing at the moment, and how she looks like when she takes a photo with her mobile camera in front of the mirror to upload it to a social network.

 

  • And, when I ask her why she does that such things, she always answers me: Because everybody does it!
  • And, when I ask her why she does that such things, she always answers me: Because everybody does it!

 

  • I remember when I hadn’t got a mobile and my friends and I went to look up to each other to our houses.
  • I remember when I hadn’t gotten a mobile yetand my friends and I went to each other's houses (to talk to one another, to see each other, etc...).

 

  • That was true relationships!
  • Those were true relationships!

 

  • How do you mobile phones will change in the next 5 years?
  • How do you think mobile phones will change in the next 5 years?

 

  • However, with new mobiles there is a trend toward make them with a big touch screen and with a powerful OS that permits you install a lot of applications.
  • However, with new mobiles there is a trend toward making them with a big touch screen and with a powerful OS that permits you install a lot of applications.

 

  • In order to this tendency, I think in the next years we’ll have a mix between computers and mobile phones.
  • Because of this tendency, I think in the next (few) years we’ll have a mix between computers and mobile phones.

 

  • It could be funny, but I’m not very interested in the new mobile phones technologies, and I am a telecommunications engineer.
  • It could be funny, but I’m not very interested in the new mobile phones technologies, and I am a telecommunications engineer.

 

  • However, I always prefer a smaller one with few gadgets because I only use it for make very few calls or send some messages.
  • However, I always prefer a smaller one with few gadgets because I only use it for making a few calls or to send some messages.

 
Yeah, I think cell phones are getting ridiculous now...
Feb 25th 2010 02:18 Sprachjunge

  • This is an exercise of my English Student's book.
  • This is an exercise from/out of my English Student's book.

 

  • I've decided to make here all my writting exercises.
  • I've decided to write all of my exercises here./share my writing exercises here.

 

  • Importance of mobile phones for Young people:
  • Importance of mobile phones for young people:

 

  • I am surprised with the dependence of young people with mobile phones.
  • I am surprised by the dependence of young people on mobile phones.

 

  • I can see it very clearly in my fifteen years old cousin.
  • I can see it very clearly with my fifteen-year-old cousin.

 

  • She is always with her mobile, listening music, making photos, tipping messages and …do you have any word for when you call someone but you put down before they can answer?
  • She is always on her mobile, listening to music, taking photos/pictures, typing messages and …do you have any word for when you call someone, but you hang up before he/she can answer? (Hm, I think it depends on the context. If you do it as a joke, you could call it "crank calling," although that usually refers to when you call someone and pretend to be someone else--radio presenters often do this. If she calls a guy but hangs up on him because she's intoxicated, we in the States (informally) call that "drunk dialing." :)

 

  • In Spain it is called “toque” (touch?) or “perdida/llamada perdida” (lost call?).
  • In Spain, it is called a “toque” (touch?) or “perdida/llamada perdida” (lost call?). (Oh, I see what you mean. Yes, in English it would be a "lost call." But usually lost calls happen by accident--the term doesn't imply that you call someone and deliberately hang up on him/her.)

 

  • Of course, she hasn’t got good marks in her classes, because she is more worried by having a beautiful mobile with the last music, knowing what her friend is doing at the moment, and how she looks like when she makes a photo with her mobile camera in front of the mirror to upload it to a social network.
  • Of course/Unfortunately/However, she doesn't get good grades in her classes because she is more worried about having a beautiful/up-to-date/snazzy/chic mobile with the latest music, knowing what her friend is doing at the moment, and seeing how she looks like when she takes a picture (with her mobile camera) in front of the mirror to upload it to a social network.

 

  • And, when I ask her why she does that such things, she always answers me: Because everybody does it!
  • And, when I ask her why she does that such things, she always answers me with: "Because everybody does it!" (Also possible: "she always responds: "Because..." or "she always answers: "Because...")

 

  • I remember when I hadn’t got a mobile and my friends and I went to look up to each other to our houses.
  • I remember the time when I didn't have a mobile: and my friends and I went to each other's house (to see each other)!

 

  • That was true relationships!
  • Those were true relationships!

 
Hey! Sorry, I have to go to lunch now! I'll try to finish the rest later. :)
Feb 25th 2010 02:53 Serendipity

Thank you for your correction no llora <3!!

Thanks Sprachjunge! Don't worry, this one is too long U.U.
Lost calls are usually made as very short calls, so the other person hasn't got time to answer...mejor lo explico en español. Se les llama "toques" proque son llamadas muy cortas, y se usan como una especie de aviso. Por ejemplo, para ir a trabajar quedo con una compañera para ir en un solo coche, y para que una no esté esperando ahora que hace frio en la calle, la que lleva el coche ese día le da un "toque" al a otra para que baje a la calle cuando va a salir. No gastas dinero en llamada y es una forma de avisar.
However, young people are doing this all day with nosense! Only like a way to keep in touch withouth talk.
Feb 26th 2010 08:16 naoki

Parece que en todo el mundo hay mucha gente che es adicto al teléfono móvil, sea los adultos o los chicos. A mí me gusta el ordenador más que el teléfono móvil, y a mí me gusta el silencio, así que rara vez uso teléfono móvil.
Feb 26th 2010 14:49 Serendipity

Naoki, yo también prefiero el ordenador, y me paso prácticamente el día delante de él, tanto por trabajo como por ocio...y el teléfono móvil lo uso tan poco que a veces no me acuerdo donde lo dejo en mi casa, y cuando me llaman no me entero...

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