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Everyday, we can hear a lot of noises. Normally, when I wake up, I can’t hear anything, because it is very early in the morning. However, some days the only sound I can hear it is the wind blowing loudly.
While I am at work, I can hear my mates speaking, whispering or laughing. But when they all are quite, the only noise in the department it’s the tipping of every of us in our keyboards. And sometimes one of the telephones starts ringing.
When I am at home in the evening or night, if I pay attention I hear a lot of noises. The washing machine whirring in the kitchen…or in my neighbor’s kitchen. The swish of the water through the radiator.
Mar 05th 2010 23:58 Angelo

Hi,
That's too bad...
I understand you. I hope you become comfortable.
Mar 06th 2010 01:29 no llora <3

  • While I am at work, I can hear my mates speaking, whispering or laughing.
  • While I am at work, I can hear my co-workers speaking, whispering or laughing.

 

  • But when they all are quite, the only noise in the department it’s the tipping of every of us in our keyboards.
  • But when they all are quite, the only noise in the department is the typing of everyone's keyboards.

 
Mar 06th 2010 02:21 Serendipity

Angelo, Thanks for the comment!

no llora <3, Thank you very much for your correction ^^
Mar 09th 2010 01:05 Street-Smart Language Learning

  • Everyday, we can hear a lot of noises.
  • Everyday, we can hear a lot of noises. [It sounds more natural like this.]

 

  • However, some days the only sound I can hear it is the wind blowing loudly.
  • However, some days the only sound I can hear it is the wind blowing loudly.

 

  • But when they all are quite, the only noise in the department it’s the tipping of every of us in our keyboards.
  • But when they all are quiet, the only noise in the department is all of us tapping on our keyboards. [Again, this sounds more natural. And I presume you meant "tapping" rather than "typing", although both could work here.]

 

  • When I am at home in the evening or night, if I pay attention I hear a lot of noises.
  • When I am at home in the evening or night, if I pay attention I can hear a lot of noises.

 

  • The washing machine whirring in the kitchen…or in my neighbor’s kitchen.
  • The washing machine whirring in the kitchen… or in my neighbor’s kitchen.

 
Well written!
Mar 09th 2010 01:25 Serendipity

Thank you very much for your correction and comments ^^

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