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Each person destined to find a place where he feels himself good and quietly, like a home. I think I found that one. It is a small town- St. Gallen.
Living there a year I loved a town, its inhabitants and, of course, Institut auf dem Rosenberg, where I studied. Calm and safety, prevailing in Switzerland, provide an ideal environment for education. High level of education valued not only in Switzerland, but also in most European' and American' Universities.
Institut auf dem Rosenberg is an excellent place to get education which is an ideal base for making career. Studying in boarding-school affects person's nature, preparing for independent living. Relationships, underway between students, is for life.
Besides, Institut auf dem Rosenberg is the place, where are students from different countries. During studies they acquaint each other with their country, culture, help in language learning.
Studying there for a year I receive an unforgettable experience: my language skills noticeably improved, I learned how to build relationships with other people, how to organize my time and how to make responsible decisions independently.
Finally, I want to say that a person have to self-improvement. This year I want to learn one more language, improve my performance and finish school, knowing that I am ready for adulthood. I am absolutelly sure that Institut auf dem Rosenberg is the right place where I can implement all these.
Jul 29th 2010 12:24 kumajeff

  • Each person destined to find a place where he feels himself good and quietly, like a home.
  • Each person is destined to find a place where he himself (might be a good idea to use he/she, and him/herself to not come off as sexist.)feels himself good and at peace, a place like home.

 

  • Living there a year I loved a town, its inhabitants and, of course, Institut auf dem Rosenberg, where I studied.
  • After Living there for a year, I began to love the town, its inhabitants and, of course, Institut auf dem Rosenberg, the place where I studied.

 

  • Calm and safety, prevailing in Switzerland, provide an ideal environment for education.
  • Calm The peaceful(Calm does not sound natural here) and safe Switzerland, provides an ideal environment for education.

 

  • High level of education valued not only in Switzerland, but also in most European' and American' Universities.
  • High level of education is valued not only in Switzerland, but also in most European and American(Adding an/n to Europe and America already indicate possession, so you do not need 's) Universities.

 

  • Institut auf dem Rosenberg is an excellent place to get education which is an ideal base for making career.
  • Institut auf dem Rosenberg is an excellent place to get an education and build your way towards a career.

 

  • Studying in boarding-school affects person's nature, preparing for independent living.
  • Studying in boarding-school affects a person's nature, through the preparation for independent living.

 

  • Relationships, underway between students, is for life.
  • Relationships, underway between students, is for life. I'm not completely sure what you are trying to say here but maybe: Relationships are for life. is enough.

 

  • Besides, Institut auf dem Rosenberg is the place, where are students from different countries.
  • Besides, Institut auf dem Rosenberg is a place, where students come from many(optional) different countries.

 

  • During studies they acquaint each other with their country, culture, help in language learning.
  • During studies they acquaint each other with their country, culture, and help each other in learning languages.

 

  • Studying there for a year I receive an unforgettable experience: my language skills noticeably improved, I learned how to build relationships with other people, how to organize my time and how to make responsible decisions independently.
  • Studying there for a year I received an unforgettable experience: my language skills noticeably improved, I learned how to build relationships with other people, how to organize my time and how to make responsible decisions independently.(Here responsible and independently kind of mean the same thing, so you can end the sentence after decisions. It probably sounds more natural this way as well.)

 

  • Finally, I want to say that a person have to self-improvement.
  • Finally, I want to say that a person has to strive for self-improvement.

 

  • I am absolutelly sure that Institut auf dem Rosenberg is the right place where I can implement all these.
  • I am absolutelly sure that Institut auf dem Rosenberg is the right place where I can implement all of these.

 
Glad to hear that you've found a place that suits you well, and good luck with your studies!

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