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Jan 30th 2011 07:32
I have kept a dairy since i was kid. One of the reason I have kept a diary steadly is <The diary of a young girl Anne Frank>. I can wirte the reason in detail in Korean, but I can't write in English.(I fully realize that I should hit the book in English.) Simply put, I want to write my life and complicated feelings and secret and everything of me in my diary like Anne. Anne died when she was 15 years old, but She sitill living in her diary. I read my 14years diary yesterday, I felt I became a 14 years old girl who wrote this diary. I'm sure that it's same thing.
I'm reading <The diary of a young girl Anne Frank>(anoter version.) once more. It's not usually a book people and I read. The book that i'm reading now is complete and unexpurgated edition. The difference of complete and unexpurgated edition between a tabloid edition is I CAN FEEL ALL Anne's feelings.

January 27. Why did Hitler massacre 6 million Jew?? I searched about World War II and Jew and read a world history book.
Dante
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 04th 2011 01:40
  • The Diary of a Young Girl Anne Frank.

  • The "Diary of a Young Girl" by Anne Frank.

 
  • I have kept a dairy since i was kid.

  • I have kept a dairy since I was kid.

 
  • One of the reason I have kept a diary steadly is <The diary of a young girl Anne Frank>.

  • One of the reasons I have kept a diary steadly is I was inspired by the book "The Diary of a Young Girl" by Anne Frank.[** You already said "steadily" so you don't have to say it again **]

 
  • I can wirte the reason in detail in Korean, but I can't write in English.(I fully realize that I should hit the book in English.) Simply put, I want to write my life and complicated feelings and secret and everything of me in my diary like Anne.

  • I can write the my reasons in detail in Korean, but I can't write them in English. I fully realize that I should hit the book in English. Simply put, I want to write about my life, feelings, secrets, and everything else about me in my diary like Anne.

 
  • Anne died when she was 15 years old, but She sitill living in her diary.

  • Anne died when she was 15 years old, but she lives on through her diary. She sitill living in her diary.

 
  • I read my 14years diary yesterday, I felt I became a 14 years old girl who wrote this diary.

  • I read my 14years diary yesterday, I felt I became a 14 years old girl who wrote this diary. Do you mean "I read my diary yesterday, and I felt I became the 14-year-old girl who wrote it." (?)

 
  • I'm sure that it's same thing.

  • I'm sure that it's same thing. [* This needs a little more explanation. *]

 
  • I'm reading <The diary of a young girl Anne Frank>(anoter version.) once more.

  • I'm now reading a different version of "The Diary of a Young Girl". [* You don't have to cite the author again. Also, capitalize titles and put them in quotes. *]

 
  • It's not usually a book people and I read.

  • It's not one people usually read. usually a book people and I read.

 
  • The book that i'm reading now is complete and unexpurgated edition.

  • The version that I'm reading now is the complete and unexpurgated edition.

 
  • The difference of complete and unexpurgated edition between a tabloid edition is I CAN FEEL ALL Anne's feelings.

  • The difference between the complete and unexpurgated edition and a mainstream edition is that I CAN FEEL ALL of Anne's feelings. [* "Mainstream" means the popular editions. "Tabloid" had negative connotations, which I don't think you mean. *]

 
  • January 27.

  • January 27. [* Why is this here? *]

 
  • Why did Hitler massacre 6 million Jew??

  • Why did Hitler massacre 6 million Jews??

 
  • I searched about World War II and Jew and read a world history book.

  • I searched on World War II and Jews and read a world history book.

 
Good job. I read that book years ago. Now I may want to read it again.
Feb 04th 2011 15:12 buskinGrace
Thank you for correcting my entry:)
kabochachacha
Thank you for your correction!
Feb 04th 2011 23:38
  • One of the reason I have kept a diary steadly is <The diary of a young girl Anne Frank>.

  • One of the reasons why I have continuously kept a diary steadly is because of <The diary of a young girl Anne Frank>.

 
  • I read my 14years diary yesterday, I felt I became a 14 years old girl who wrote this diary.

  • Yesterday, I read my diary entries when I was 14years old diary yesterday, I felt like I became the 14 years old girl who wrote this diary again.

 
  • I'm sure that it's same thing.

  • I'm sure that it's same thing. (I'm sure that's the same as Anne's diary ??)

 
  • It's not usually a book people and I read.

  • It's not the version people usually a book people and I read.

 
  • The book that i'm reading now is complete and unexpurgated edition.

  • The book that i'm reading now is the complete and unexpurgated unedited edition.

 
  • January 27.

  • On January 27...

 
I'm glad to see that you're writing more complex/longer sentences :D How's your vacation so far???

새해 복 많이 받으세요!!^^
Feb 05th 2011 11:37 buskinGrace
Thank you for correcting my entry:)
There's no vacation to Korean highschool student.(haha) I went to go school to study new grade. Finally, I'm going to Seoul in Feburary 16th~~!!!(짝짝짝!)
언니도 새해 복 많이 받으세요~~^.^!
Feb 05th 2011 16:30 kabochachacha
No worries ;)
Boo for there being no vacation, but... Yay!! for starting a new year and going to Seoul :D You'll be in 2nd year highschool now right? I'm sure there are more interesting things :) I hope you don't get tired of studying and just enjoy ^___^
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