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Mar 25th 2010 13:19
Sometimes I feel tired. Althongh I go to great lengths to keep my steps, I failed now and then. Life like a tiny marble. It can't control itself when it is rolling. All of us were assailed by all kinds of lures. We should not lost ourself. Keep the dignity wherever you are.
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Sometimes, I feel tired.
Although I go to great lengths to keep up my steps, I continue tofail (you should use a present-tense verb here)now and then (I think "now and then" is okay, but I would use "here and there" here).
Life is like a tiny marble.
All of us are assailed by all kinds of lures. (Keep the same tense.)
We should not lose ourselves. (Tense again. Also, remember "ourselves" is always plural. :) )