use phone in instrument?

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Nowadays, We are living with benefit from high-technologies.
Before merely 10 years ago, we couldn't imagine that these life'll come.
Now, most people don't use writhing letter, film camera and phone booth.
We can draw picture with computer and take a picture without film. New thing is replace with old thing.
However how about using instruments? On orchestra, people only use mobile telephones even no traditional instrument. Academics from the University of Michigan have anounced that they'll hold their first concert which use only 20 of Apple's best-selling mobile telephones. Some of the them are wireless radios, motion sensors and the touch screen produce diffrent noise each one.
inaddition I-phone is in this group.
Development of technology is amazing. It expand to world that we can't imagine.
One of my friand who work in department of technology said that such thing which mp3 or camera and so on will disappear because of Phone.

It can be true that we can cmanage everything with only phone.

It.... might be when I am a granny ???? HaHa :-D
How do you thing?
Jan 09th 2010 18:48 oof

  • use phone in instrument?
  • use phone in instrument? Using phones as instruments?

 

  • Nowadays, We are living with benefit from high-technologies.
  • Nowadays, we are living with benefits from hightechnologiesical advances.

 

  • Before merely 10 years ago, we couldn't imagine that these life'll come.
  • Before Merely 10 years ago, we couldn't imagine that theselifelife'llwouldcome.

 

  • Now, most people don't use writhing letter, film camera and phone booth.
  • Now, most people don't use writhing letter,write letters or usefilm cameras and phone booths.

 

  • We can draw picture with computer and take a picture without film.
  • We can draw pictureswith computers and take a pictures without film.

 

  • New thing is replace with old thing.
  • New things is replace with old things.

 

  • However how about using instruments?
  • However, how about using instruments?

 

  • On orchestra, people only use mobile telephones even no traditional instrument.
  • On In oneorchestra, people only use mobile telephones evenandno traditional instruments.

 

  • Academics from the University of Michigan have anounced that they'll hold their first concert which use only 20 of Apple's best-selling mobile telephones.
  • Academics from the University of Michigan have anounced that they'll hold their first concert which uses only 20 of Apple's best-selling mobile telephones.

 

  • Some of the them are wireless radios, motion sensors and the touch screen produce diffrent noise each one.
  • Some of the them are havewireless radios, motion sensors and the touch screens and they each produce different noises each one.

 

  • inaddition I-phone is in this group.
  • inaddition I-phone is in this group.Maybe I'm wrong, but aren't 'Apple's best-selling mobile telephones' I-phones? This seems like unnecessary repetition to me.

 

  • Development of technology is amazing.
  • The development of technology is amazing.

 

  • It expand to world that we can't imagine.
  • It expand tocreatesworlds that we can't imagine.

 

  • One of my friand who work in department of technology said that such thing which mp3 or camera and so on will disappear because of Phone.
  • One of my friand friendswho work in thedepartment of technology said that such things aswhich mp3 playersorandcameras and so on will disappear because of phones. Do you mean some official Department of Technology? Or the tech industry?

 

  • It can be true that we can cmanage everything with only phone.
  • It can be true that we can cmanage everything with only a phone.

 

  • How do you thing?
  • How do you thing?What do you think?

 
Hi Riya^^

Good writing. Be careful about using plurals though. You missed a few.

I think it will happen before you become a granny!
Jan 09th 2010 22:12 riya

Thanks a lot your comment, Oof !!
I thought I couldn't riceave receive comment, because this topic is not fun.
Your help is helpful to me. Thanks ^_^
Oh, and I'm looking forward the time when I can manage my second language skill , test score and weight. Haha :-D

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