envy..

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of yangjuan's latest journal entries Jan 08th 2010 10:14
Well, l have a chinese friend and her name is chunyeong.
when l met her first she had dream what become a stewardess same to me but we lost touch 1 years ago ..
l missed her yesterday so l visited her homepage. when l saw her pictures she become a stewardess!! her dreams was realized !!!
l was really suprise and glad at her success!! but on the other hand l felt envy of her and pitiful about me.
but what's done it's done, now l think cheer me up! and study hard!
Jan 08th 2010 10:25 Mochichan88

  • when l met her first she had dream what become a stewardess same to me but we lost touch 1 years ago ..
  • when l first met her first she had dream what to become a stewardess. I had the same goal same to me but we lost touch 1 years ago ..

 

  • when l saw her pictures she become a stewardess!!
  • when l saw her pictures, I realized she had become a stewardess!!

 

  • her dreams was realized !!!
  • her dreams was had been realized !!!

 

  • l was really suprise and glad at her success!!
  • l was really suprised and glad at her success!!

 

  • but on the other hand l felt envy of her and pitiful about me.
  • but on the other hand l felt envy envious of her and pitiful about me pity for myself.

 

  • but what's done it's done, now l think cheer me up!
  • but what's done it's is done, now l want to think cheer me up!

 
You can do it!!!!!!
Jan 08th 2010 10:33 Amy

  • Well, l have a chinese friend and her name is chunyeong.
  • Well, I have a Chinese friend and her name is Chunyeong. (You cannot notice in the correction due to the font of the text, but you typed a small 'L', not a capital I.)

 

  • when l met her first she had dream what become a stewardess same to me but we lost touch 1 years ago ..
  • When I first met her, she had a dream to become a stewardess. I had the same dream, but we lost touch 1 years ago ..

 

  • l missed her yesterday so l visited her homepage.
  • I missed her yesterday so I visited her homepage.

 

  • when l saw her pictures she become a stewardess!!
  • When I saw her pictures, she had become a stewardess!!

 

  • her dreams was realized !!!
  • Her dreams was realised !!!

 

  • l was really suprise and glad at her success!!
  • I was really suprised and happy for her!!

 

  • but on the other hand l felt envy of her and pitiful about me.
  • But on the other hand, I felt envious of her and sorry for myself.

 

  • but what's done it's done, now l think cheer me up!
  • But what's done is done, now I will cheer up!

 

  • and study hard!
  • And study hard!

 
I hope you fulfill your dreams too! ^^
Jan 08th 2010 15:05 yangjuan

Thank you Mochichan and Amy ^^ Thank you for your encouragement ^^
Jan 09th 2010 03:21 ่조세핀

  • when l met her first she had dream what become a stewardess same to me but we lost touch 1 years ago ..
  • When l first met her, first she dreamed of becoming a stewardess/ had a goal to become a stewardess.had dream what become a stewardess same to me I had the same goal. But, we lost touch a year1 years ago ..(1 year ago is also right, but using the particle 'a' makes it sound better).

 

  • l missed her yesterday so l visited her homepage.
  • I missed her yesterday, (or I was missing her yesterday) so I visited her homepage.

 
^Good job^
Whatever you decide to do, 꾸준히 노력하면 성공할거야. [I memorized that, so the grammar should be intact this time around...;)..]
Jan 09th 2010 09:57 yangjuan

thank you for your help ^^ 고마워요 조세핀 꾸준히 노력할게요 ^^

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