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A couple of days ago, I came across a beautiful picture while I read
a magazine.
The first one I post up here is the picture I saw from magazine.
It was taken by Joel Meyerowitz.
I loved the color as well as the composition of it.
I wanted to get more information about him and to see more pictures.
After I researched the internet, I found his web site. http://www.joelmeyerowitz.com/photography/book_2_pics.asp?bookvar=2&ISBN=0821227955
The second picture I post up here was taken by Korean photographer
named Edward Kim.
I also like this picture.
I don`t know exactly when the photographer took it but I assume it may be
around 1950`s.
I like the feeling out of the black and white picture. I also like
the composition.
a magazine.
The first one I post up here is the picture I saw from magazine.
It was taken by Joel Meyerowitz.
I loved the color as well as the composition of it.
I wanted to get more information about him and to see more pictures.
After I researched the internet, I found his web site. http://www.joelmeyerowitz.com/photography/book_2_pics.asp?bookvar=2&ISBN=0821227955
The second picture I post up here was taken by Korean photographer
named Edward Kim.
I also like this picture.
I don`t know exactly when the photographer took it but I assume it may be
around 1950`s.
I like the feeling out of the black and white picture. I also like
the composition.
Pictures I Like
The first one I posted up here is the picture I saw from magazine.
post or posting-present tense
posted-past tense
You could also say, "The first one I am posting up here is the picture I saw from magazine." if you want this sentence to be in the present tense.
The second picture I posted up here was taken by Korean photographer
is=present tense
was=past tense
I also like this picture.
around 1950s.
I like the feeling of the black and white picture.
Because I haven`t written journals for a while, I make
lots of mistakes...
I like pictures. I enjoy both, taking ones and seeing ones. ^^
The Some pictures I like
A couple of days ago, I came across a beautiful picture while I read was reading a magazine.
All as one sentence. The event (verb) of coming across the picture happens during a longer event (verb) of reading, which is why you use the different tenses.
The first one I'm posting up here is the picture I saw from in the magazine.
I loved the colors as well as the composition of it.
I wanted to get more information about him and to see more of his pictures.
After I researched looked on the internet, I found his web site.
Less formal, so it fits the tone of your writing.
The second picture I'm posting up here was taken by a Korean photographer
around the 1950`s.
I like the feeling out of from this the black and white picture.
It's clear and directly written.
It`s really helpful to me! ^^*
Some Pictures I Like
A couple of days ago, I came across a beautiful picture while I was reading (something).
The first one picture I'm posting up here is the picture one I saw from in the/that magazine.
It is better for me to say the noun before the pronoun to make it clearer. In this case, I switched "picture" and "one".
You can say either "the magazine" or "that magazine", but "that magazine" makes it sound more specific.
I love the colors as well as the composition of it.
After I researched / did some research / searched on the internet, I found his website.
"website" is commonly spelled as one word
around/in the 1950s.
I like the feeling evoked by this black and white picture.
another expression you can use
Thank you for correcting my journal. Everything you help me with English
is quite helpful to me.