What does your dream house look like?

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The question below is from the TOEFL speaking test.
TOEFL is a test for non-native English speakers who want to study abroad.
It is very difficult for me to speak English. Because all Japanese people use Japanese.
So I have no chance to speak English any time as long as I live in Japan.

Could someone please help me practice speaking English ?
And also I want to know what your dream house look like !!

Question --------------
What does your dream house look like? Use details to support your response.

Answer ---------------
My dream house look like simple.
I have two reasons to support my statement.
First reason is that I can clean my house easily. If there were less funitures in the room, it could save time to clean the room.
Second reason is that I could feel free to live in my life without disgusting things and also spend a good time in there.
In conclusion, For these reasons my dream house look like simple for this question.



Thank you for reading !!!
Mar 30th 2009 01:52 sc597

  • And also I want to know what your dream house look like !!
  • And also I want to know what your dream house looks like !!

 

  • My dream house look like simple.
  • My dream house looks simple.

 

  • If there were less funitures in the room, it could save time to clean the room.
  • If there was less furniture in the room, it could reduce the time needed to clean the room.

 

  • Second reason is that I could feel free to live in my life without disgusting things and also spend a good time in there.
  • Second reason is that I could feel free to live my life without disgusting things and also spend good times there.

 

  • In conclusion, For these reasons my dream house look like simple for this question.
  • In conclusion and to answer this question, for these reasons my dream house looks simple.

 
Mar 30th 2009 02:39 Go

Thank you for your quick correction!!
I was very surprised!! I really apreciate it :D
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