It’s raining

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It’s raining now. I am looking out of the window. Flowers blossom under the rain and the gentle breeze is wafting the scent of them, so sweet and so cleaning. What a wonderful rain. It’s sneaking into the night and moistening the earth.
I hear a baby’s cry and his\her mum is comforting him\her with a lullaby. The world is so quiet. My eyes lost in the rain and my heart lost in the fragrantness.
Apr 13th 2010 21:26 tanvm07

Wow, it seems perfect, your english is very good, better than most people I know in England even.
Apr 13th 2010 21:33 winni

@tanvm07 : Thanks. But I still need more practice. In fact, my English is not as good as you think. I just write down what I can speak in English. There are still some thoughts in my mind which I can't express well.:)
Apr 14th 2010 17:44 kaschka

  • I am looking out of the window.
  • I am looking out of the window.

 

  • Flowers blossom under the rain and the gentle breeze is wafting the scent of them, so sweet and so cleaning.
  • Flowers (are) blossom(ing) under the rain and the gentle breeze is wafting their scent of them, so sweet and so cleansing.

 

  • What a wonderful rain.
  • What a wonderful rain.

 

  • It’s sneaking into the night and moistening the earth.
  • It sneaks into the night and moistens the earth. (do you mean rain in general, or just this particular rain?)

 

  • My eyes lost in the rain and my heart lost in the fragrantness.
  • My eyes (are) lost in the rain and my heart (is) lost in the fragrance fragrantness.

 
The person who corrected this before me is right, I had a pretty hard time correcting this. :)
Your English is really good, I'm jealous.

In response to your comment on my entry, I can recognize both 间体 and 繁体, but I'm more comfortable with 间体. :(

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