1/13 TOKYO is so cold!!!

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Jan 14th 2010 03:54

I do not why but ,

now these days i fill this country(tokyo) is getting so cold.

This reason makes me, i do wanna go out side.

lang-8 is most great idea and tool!

this idea is sosososos genius.

i wanna stop smokking, but it's really hard....

but i have to think about my healthly too,,,,

i wanna go to sydney or hot country.

or travel arround the world.itari,spain,france.

i really hate cold country.

and so sad news, OASIS ,noel, please come back to OASIS.

I love liam as same as noel.too,i'm waitting for you.

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Jan 14th 2010 04:04 Kitsune

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English , German

I do not why but ,
I do not know why but ,

now these days i fill this country(tokyo) is getting so cold.
now these days i fill this country(tokyo) is getting so cold.these days I feel that it is getting so cold in this city.

i wanna stop smokking, but it's really hard....
i wanna stop smokking, but it's really hard....smoking

but i have to think about my healthly too,,,,
but i have to think about my healthly too,,,,health

itari,spain,france.
itari,spain,france.Italy

Yeap, it's cool that you wanna stop smoking) I almost did it & it's the reason of my self-esteem's growth)

Jan 14th 2010 04:21 Mr. Shiny & New

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Mandarin

now these days i fill this country(tokyo) is getting so cold.
I do not know why but now these days* I feel this country (Japan) is getting so cold. *There are two ways to open this sentence: these days I feel or nowadays I feel

This reason makes me, i do wanna go out side.
This reason makes me*, I do wanna go outside. *I think you are missing a word here, such as "unhappy" or "sad" or something.

lang-8 is most great idea and tool!
lang-8 is most great idea and tool! *People generally don't use "most" and "great" together, they would say "greatest", and it should probably have an article (a, an, the):lang-8 is the greatest idea and the best tool!

i wanna stop smokking, but it's really hard....
I wanna stop smoking, but it's really hard....

but i have to think about my healthly too,,,,
but I have to think about my health too.

i wanna go to sydney or hot country.
I wanna go to Sydney or a hot country, or travel around the world.

or travel arround the world.
or travel arround the world. *This part should be part of the previous sentence.

itari,spain,france.
Italy, Spain, France.

i really hate cold country.
I really hate cold countries.

and so sad news, OASIS ,noel, please come back to OASIS.
And such sad news: OASIS! Noel, please come back to OASIS.

I love liam as same as noel.
I love Liam as much as Noel.

too,i'm waitting for you.
too, I'm waiting for you. *I'm not sure what this sentence means but I corrected the spelling.

Two comments:
1. Your writing style is very informal. I didn't correct every informal thing because I don't know how formal you want to be. But using all-lower-case letters is wrong in most writing. Also, using "wanna" instead of "want to" is extremely informal, or childish. I'd write "want to" even if I might say "wanna" when speaking.
2. If you want to quit smoking, quiting "cold turkey" (that is, stopping abruptly and never smoking again) is the most successful method. Good luck :)