2010/10/12 really hard....japanese style.

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Today was really hard day; I finished my work @ 23:30 pm.

Oh, my god. I can not take enough time to sleep.

Tomorrow morning, I have to review a huge number of documents.

But thinking in a good way, it means I am glowing up.

Writing and speaking is really different.

I think my sentence is not for writing sentence.

That is a big problem for me;

I can not distinguish which is good way to write a sentence.

By the way, I had a chance to talk with Managing director of my company.

He was such a nice guy and so brilliant guy.

I feel happy to have a conversation with him.

Tomorrow morning, I have to get up at 5 am.

So…….as soon as possible, I have to go to bed.

My sweet bed let me see such a nice dream.

Have a good night to me.
Oct 13th 2010 07:00 Luca

  • I can not take enough time to sleep.
  • I do not have enough time to sleep.

 

  • But thinking in a good way, it means I am glowing up.
  • But thinking in a good way, it means I am growing up.

 

  • I can not distinguish which is good way to write a sentence.
  • I can not distinguish what is a good way to write a sentence.

 

  • By the way, I had a chance to talk with Managing director of my company.
  • Also, I had a chance to talk with Managing director of my company.

 

  • He was such a nice guy and so brilliant guy.
  • He was such a nice guy and so brilliant guy.

 

  • as soon as possible, I have to go to bed.
  • I have to go to bed as soon as possible.

 

  • My sweet bed let me see such a nice dream.
  • My sweet bed, let me have such a nice dream.

 
Do not worry, you will get better at English. Some of the sentences did not make sense. But honestly, I think you are doing great.
You really should find some time to sleep though. My friend Jeli does that all the time, it is not good for your health. ):
Oct 13th 2010 23:53 Satoshi.S

  • But thinking in a good way, it means I am glowing up.
  • Butbut thinking in a good way, it means I am glowing up. 等位接続詞から文を始めるのはよくないらしいので上の文とつなげたほうがよさそうです。

 
ちょっと細かい添削ですが、間違っていたらスミマセン。
お体には気をつけて。
Oct 14th 2010 00:07 Nozomu

TO Luca and Satoshi-san, thank you very much for your kindness advice.
Today, I finished my work early time.
so, i will have deeeep sleeep.
hahahha
Nozomu
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