this is my writing assignment.

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This is my writing assignment.:)
Please check my writing.

If you want to make a good impression at job interview, you should follow these instructions.

First, it is necessary to know information about the company that you want to work. So you should go to a library and investigate the history of a company. It is very helpful for your interview.

Next, wear a neat dress like suit. Not only knowledge but appearance is important things at job interview. If you wear a trim cloths, you look polite. It is crucial factor to give a good impression for interviewer.

Then make an appointment an interview with an interviewer.

Finally, there are the most important things you have to do for interview. Tell about your job interview and answer in detail. And that show a deep interest in a company. Please don't forget a greeting of thanks after interview.

I confident that you can make a good impression at job interview and get a job by following my advices. I wish you good luck!

Mar 14th 2010 08:07 David Nam

  • If you want to make a good impression at job interview, you should follow these instructions.
  • If you want to make a good impression at a job interview, you should follow these instructions.

 

  • First, it is necessary to know information about the company that you want to work.
  • First, it is necessary to know information about the company that you want to work for.

 

  • So you should go to a library and investigate the history of a company.
  • So you should go to a library and investigate research the history of a company. ("research" is more commonly used if you talk about looking up information at a library)

 

  • Next, wear a neat dress like suit.
  • Next, wear a neat dress something neat like a suit.

 

  • Not only knowledge but appearance is important things at job interview.
  • Not only knowledge, but appearance is also important at a job interview.

 

  • If you wear a trim cloths, you look polite.
  • If you wear a trim nice clothes, you look polite.

 

  • It is crucial factor to give a good impression for interviewer.
  • It is acrucial factor to give a good impression for to the interviewer.

 

  • Then make an appointment an interview with an interviewer.
  • Then make an appointment for an interview with an interviewer.

 

  • Finally, there are the most important things you have to do for interview.
  • Finally, there these are the most important things you have to do for an interview.

 

  • And that show a deep interest in a company.
  • And that then show a deep interest inthe company.

 

  • Please don't forget a greeting of thanks after interview.
  • Please don't forget a greeting of to say thanks after an interview.

 

  • I confident that you can make a good impression at job interview and get a job by following my advices.
  • I'm confident that you can make a good impression at a job interview and get a job by following my advice.

 
Great advice! I am sure anyone who follows it will make a good impression at a job interview ^^
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