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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Su-hyun's latest journal entries May 31st 2011 12:11
A TV program "I'm a singer" is really famous not only my family but also many friends and people. I can get the power of the positive when I watch the singers to sing songs on the stage at the program.
They always do their best to win the first on the stage. They spent much time to sing a song. First, they chose songs to let us hear and second songwriters arrange a piece of music newly. Nobody in the program also think that I'm a best singer in them. All of them do their best for perfect stages .They cheer and encourage each other. When I saw the program, I thought they seem to be similar to mine. I tried to make the power of the positive while preparing this contest. I know I'm not proficient in English so I'm very afraid of. However, I could get the positive mind after preparing this contest.My goal is not winner. I want to pass this preliminar round and go up the semifianl, not alone with my friends get the power of the positive. That is my hope and goal.
i believe myself.My family and friend also believe the power of the positive that I'm 황예진
May 31st 2011 13:05 YiFen238

  • A TV program "I'm a singer" is really famous not only my family but also many friends and people.
  • A TV program called "I'm a Singer" is really famous not only among my family but also among many of my friends and other people.

 

  • I can get the power of the positive when I watch the singers to sing songs on the stage at the program.
  • I can get the power of the feel very positive when I watch the singers to sing songs on the stage. at the program.

 

  • They always do their best to win the first on the stage.
  • They always do their best to win the first prize. on the stage.

 

  • They spent much time to sing a song.
  • They spent put in so much time to sing a song.

 

  • First, they chose songs to let us hear and second songwriters arrange a piece of music newly.
  • First, they choose songs to let for us to hear, and second then songwriters arrange the music differently. a piece of music newly.

 

  • Nobody in the program also think that I'm a best singer in them.
  • Nobody in on the program also thinks that I'm a he or she is the best singer there. in them.

 

  • All of them do their best for perfect stages .
  • All of them do their best for to have perfect stages performances.

 

  • When I saw the program, I thought they seem to be similar to mine.
  • When I saw the program, I thought they their situation seems to be similar to mine.

 

  • I tried to make the power of the positive while preparing this contest.
  • I tried to make the power of the feel positive while preparing for this contest.

 

  • I know I'm not proficient in English so I'm very afraid of.
  • I know I'm not proficient in English, so I'm very nervous. afraid of.

 

  • However, I could get the positive mind after preparing this contest.
  • However, I could get the a positive mindset after while preparing for this contest.

 

  • My goal is not winner.
  • My goal is not to be the winner.

 

  • I want to pass this preliminar round and go up the semifianl, not alone with my friends get the power of the positive.
  • I want to pass this preliminary round and go up to the semifinal, not alone with my friends helping me get the power of the feel positive.

 

  • i believe myself.
  • I believe in myself.

 

  • My family and friend also believe the power of the positive that I'm 황예진
  • My family and friends also believe the power of the in being positive and that I'm 황예진.

 
:)
Jun 24th 2011 12:56 Su-hyun
Thank you so much. ^^
Jun 02nd 2011 16:47 sujuftw

  • A TV program "I'm a singer" is really famous not only my family but also many friends and people.
  • A The TV program "I'm a singer" is really famous popular not only with my family, but also with many of my friends and other people.

 

  • They cheer and encourage each other.
  • They cheer for and encourage each other. (Or, "They encourage and cheer for each other.")

 

  • When I saw the program, I thought they seem to be similar to mine.
  • When I saw the program, I thought they seemed to be similar to mine me.

 
Good luck!^^ 화이팅~!
Jun 24th 2011 13:01 Su-hyun
Thank you so much.
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