exhausted

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Yesterday I rided from our main campus to the medical college. It took me about 3 hours. The roads is not flat, with so many ups and downs. When I got my dorm, I was really exhausted. After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon.
It's rainy today. The sky is gray, and I'm blue. My boyfriends has gone home for a week. But he has never gave me a call. I want to eat something delicious to release.
Jan 25th 2010 04:52 Joey

  • exhausted
  • Exhausted

 

  • Yesterday I rided from our main campus to the medical college.
  • Yesterday, I rided rode from our the main campus to the medical college.

 

  • The roads is not flat, with so many ups and downs.
  • The roads is are not flat, with there are so many ups and downs.

 

  • When I got my dorm, I was really exhausted.
  • When I got to my dorm, I was really exhausted.

 

  • After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon.
  • After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon.

 

  • It's rainy today.
  • It's a rainy today.

 

  • My boyfriends has gone home for a week.
  • My boyfriends has gone home for a week.

 

  • But he has never gave me a call.
  • But He has never gave me a call.

 

  • I want to eat something delicious to release.
  • I want to eat something delicious to release my anxiety.

 
Cheer up, there is always ice cream.
Jan 25th 2010 06:20 huxuehong

  • Yesterday I rided from our main campus to the medical college.
  • Yesterday I rode from our main campus to the medical college.

 

  • The roads is not flat, with so many ups and downs.
  • The roads are not flat, with so many ups and downs.

 

  • When I got my dorm, I was really exhausted.
  • When I arrived at my dorm, I was really exhausted. (I suggest "arrived" because it is easier for non-natives to use. "Got" has so many different meanings that depend on the word after it: got up, got out, got in, got to, etc--the next word is always important in phrasal verbs!)

 

  • After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon.
  • After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon. (Good job using the irregular verb "sleep" here. A few English adjectives become adverbs without -ly: fast, straight, hard, etc. "He hit him hard" for example.)

 

  • It's rainy today.
  • It's rainy today. (100% correct. The suggested a would be out-of-place.)

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  • My boyfriends has gone home for a week.
  • My boyfriend has gone home for a week, but he hasn't given me a call. (Yeah, good use of the present perfect tense here, but you need to memorize the irregular verb forms.)

 

  • I want to eat something delicious to release.
  • I want to eat something delicious to relax.

 
Good post. Almost nothing in there that really prevents understanding.
Jan 25th 2010 11:05 倔强小豌豆

Thank you, Joey! I'll be better~

Thank you, Nathan! You not only correct my diary, but also teach me some extra uses!

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