exhausted
Yesterday I rided from our main campus to the medical college. It took me about 3 hours. The roads is not flat, with so many ups and downs. When I got my dorm, I was really exhausted. After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon.
It's rainy today. The sky is gray, and I'm blue. My boyfriends has gone home for a week. But he has never gave me a call. I want to eat something delicious to release.
It's rainy today. The sky is gray, and I'm blue. My boyfriends has gone home for a week. But he has never gave me a call. I want to eat something delicious to release.
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Exhausted
Yesterday, I rided rode from our the main campus to the medical college.
The roads is are not flat, with there are so many ups and downs.
When I got to my dorm, I was really exhausted.
After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon.
It's a rainy today.
My boyfriends has gone home for a week.
But He has never gave me a call.
I want to eat something delicious to release my anxiety.
Yesterday I rode from our main campus to the medical college.
The roads are not flat, with so many ups and downs.
When I arrived at my dorm, I was really exhausted. (I suggest "arrived" because it is easier for non-natives to use. "Got" has so many different meanings that depend on the word after it: got up, got out, got in, got to, etc--the next word is always important in phrasal verbs!)
After taking a warm bath, I went straightly to bed, and slept until noon. (Good job using the irregular verb "sleep" here. A few English adjectives become adverbs without -ly: fast, straight, hard, etc. "He hit him hard" for example.)
It's rainy today. (100% correct. The suggested a would be out-of-place.)
My boyfriend has gone home for a week, but he hasn't given me a call. (Yeah, good use of the present perfect tense here, but you need to memorize the irregular verb forms.)
I want to eat something delicious to relax.
Thank you, Nathan! You not only correct my diary, but also teach me some extra uses!