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I'm loneliness today

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of kakiprt's latest journal entries Jan 29th 2010 23:25

Today is the day what I most like in a week, Friday.
But I should spend this time lonley.
Because my mother and older sister went out for a gathering, also my father.
In addition to the traffic jam on the way to home, my boy friend went to his home because he couldn't stay on the street for 2 hours.
When I arrived at home, I felt loneliness.
Suddenly I would like to eat sweet things.
So I went out to buy some bread and cookies.
And then I came back to home and ate that all.
After the eating, my feeling was getting better.
But I reget that I ate that all.
They make me fatness.
I don't want to be a fat girl.
I'd better do workout before going to sleep this night.

Ah!!
I found a great hand made chocolate cafe!!
huhu....I really like it.
I want to go there tomorrow, hehe.^-^;
Jan 30th 2010 06:41

  • I'm loneliness today
  • I'm lonely today.
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  • Today is the day what I most like in a week, Friday.
  • Today is the day that I most like in the week, Friday. (Friday is my favorite day in the week (sentence suggestion)).
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  • But I should spend this time lonley.
  • But I will spend this time alone.
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  • Because my mother and older sister went out for a gathering, also my father.
  • Because my mother, older sister and father went out for a gathering.
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  • In addition to the traffic jam on the way to home, my boy friend went to his home because he couldn't stay on the street for 2 hours.
  • In addition to the traffic jam on the way home, my boyfriend went home because he could not stay on the street for 2 hours.
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  • When I arrived at home, I felt loneliness.
  • When I arrived home, I felt lonely.
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  • Suddenly I would like to eat sweet things.
  • Suddenly, I felt like eating sweet things.
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  • And then I came back to home and ate that all.
  • And then I came back to home and ate them all.
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  • After the eating, my feeling was getting better.
  • After eating, I was feeling a little better.
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  • But I reget that I ate that all.
  • But I reget that I ate them all.
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  • They make me fatness.
  • They make me fatty.
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  • I'd better do workout before going to sleep this night.
  • I'd better do a workout before going to sleep tonight.
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Jan 30th 2010 15:12 selbs

  • Today is the day what I most like in a week, Friday.
  • Today is the day what I like the most in a week, Friday.
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Jan 30th 2010 20:31 kakiprt

Thank you for your comment^^
I should study English very hard! (ㅜ.ㅜ)
kakiprt
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