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May 12th 2012 08:27
Timeline has finally come to me, too. I knew that many people were forced to change their page to timeline. For me, the previous design looks more simple and easier to follow. I guess I'll need some time to get used it.
Tesa
May 12th 2012 09:39
I like the previous design better as well. Your English looks good to me. I couldn't find anything to correct.
May 12th 2012 09:53 Sho
Thanks^^
Emii
Thank you for correction!
Jun 01st 2012 05:37
  • Timeline has finally come to me, too.

  • The Timeline on Facebook has finally come to me, too.

    I think "Timeline" is a thing, so it should be "The" Timeline. (Also I think you should be more specific even though we already know the Timeline is a Facebook thing because it's your opining sentence.)

 
  • I knew that many people were forced to change their page to timeline.

  • I knew many other people were forced to change their page to the new Timeline.

 
  • For me, the previous design looks more simple and easier to follow.

  • The previous design looked much more simple and easy to follow in my opinion.

 
I didn't like the Timeline at first either, but it's supposed to be easier to use, and you can find your old posts easier since they're sorted by Time. ^-^
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