Toeful essay by myself !!
Feb 18th 2010 11:55
While there are many students who like to study by myself ,others,Including me,would rather study with one or classmate .Apart from preparing for studying exzminztion and learning capacity examoination.I always want to study with my friend who can study much better than me I have three reasons for my preference First,although I think that we need to to chat with classmate when study about it .I would like to ask for friends to solve the question.that is very difficult for me to solve it .Morover,It will make me more fan than study by myself .
In fact ,I may be the persom who be dull ,therfore I will feel bad without friends help who can tell me how to solve the questions clearly.I can also leaning through friend of knowlege which will be needed for me to solve the questions .
Second ,I often teach my favorite subject to my friend who can study much better than me ,expect for english such as writting ,reading ,and so on .We can help earth other like this . There is no person who can complete all subject .When I was a high school student,I had a rival to increse studying skills more and more .I always competed with rival because of win that be respected from rival .I get the low score I must have respected him .consequently,The competition have kept for 3 years before graduation .
Finally, studying with classmate will give me great oppotunities to make alot of friends who like to study with others .In addition to that ,I made a girl friend through studying with classmate .By studying without alone .I am clevered .As a result ,I am more likely to get high grade in my english class which will benefit when I look for a job after graduation .Furthermore ,after I succed in business .I could get used to wirkung with much of companies who can tell me some kinds of advise to run the company ,insted of become alone .
For these reasons ,I prefer studying with friends rather than shuding alone .
In fact ,I may be the persom who be dull ,therfore I will feel bad without friends help who can tell me how to solve the questions clearly.I can also leaning through friend of knowlege which will be needed for me to solve the questions .
Second ,I often teach my favorite subject to my friend who can study much better than me ,expect for english such as writting ,reading ,and so on .We can help earth other like this . There is no person who can complete all subject .When I was a high school student,I had a rival to increse studying skills more and more .I always competed with rival because of win that be respected from rival .I get the low score I must have respected him .consequently,The competition have kept for 3 years before graduation .
Finally, studying with classmate will give me great oppotunities to make alot of friends who like to study with others .In addition to that ,I made a girl friend through studying with classmate .By studying without alone .I am clevered .As a result ,I am more likely to get high grade in my english class which will benefit when I look for a job after graduation .Furthermore ,after I succed in business .I could get used to wirkung with much of companies who can tell me some kinds of advise to run the company ,insted of become alone .
For these reasons ,I prefer studying with friends rather than shuding alone .
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ToefulTOEFL essay by myself !!
While there are many students who like to study by myself alone,others, including myself, would rather study with one or moreclassmates.
Apart from preparing for studying exzminztionexaminationand learning capacity examoination examination.
I always want to study with my friend who can study much better than me.I have three reasons for my preference. First, although I think that we need to to chat with classmates while studying.
that is very difficult for me to solve it .I like to ask my friends to help me solve difficult questions.
Morover, it will make me more fan than study by myself .Moreover, it will be more fun than studying by myself.
In fact ,I may be the persom who be dull ,therfore I will feel bad without friends help who can tell me how to solve the questions clearly.In fact, I may be the person who needs the most help. Therefore I will not do as well without friends who can explain how to solve the questions.
I can also leaning through friend of knowlege which will be needed for me to solve the questions .
Second ,I often teach my favorite subject to my friend who can study much better than me ,expect for english such as writting ,reading ,and so on .Secondly, I often teach my favorite subject to my one friend who studies better than me. I teach English writing, reading, etc.
We can help earth other like this .This way, we can help each other.
TOEFL essay by myself !!
While there are many students who like to study by themselves/alone, others, including myself, would rather study with one or more classmates.
Apart from preparing for studying examinations/exams and learning capacity examination/exam. この文章は不完全だから、言いたいことが分からないんだ。
I always want to study with friends who are better students/better at studying than I am. I have three reasons for my preference. First, I think that we need to to chat with classmates while studying .
I like asking my friends to help me with difficult problems that I myself can't solve/figure out. この文章の「I myself」の意味は私自身
that is very difficult for me to solve it .
Moreover, it will be more fun than studying by myself.
先の人の添削は賛成だ。
Second, I often help my friend who studies better than I do with my favorite subjects, except(?) for English such as writing, reading, etc.
This way, we're helping each other. 「Earth」は地球だよ。言いたいのは「これで、お互いに手伝う」だろう？
No one can finish everything(?).
When I was a high school student, I had a rival to increase my studying skills.
I always competed with him because if I won, I would be respected by him.
If he beat me, I had to respect him.
Consequently, we kept this competition going for about three years before graduation.
Finally, studying with classmates will give me great opportunities to make a lot of friends who like to study with others .
In addition to that, I made a girlfriend by studying with my classmates.
By studying without alone. これも不完全だ
I am clevered. 「Clevered」は英語の言葉じゃない
As a result, I am more likely to get a higher grade in my English class which will be beneficial when I look for a job after graduation.
Furthermore, after I succeed in business. この文章も不完全だ。コンマを使えば、次の文章と組み合わせれる。
I could get used to working with many companies who can give me some kind of advice to run the company.
For these reasons, I prefer studying with friends rather than studying alone .
コンマを使ったら、スペースはコンマの後ろに付けるものだ。前じゃない。そして、つづりに気をつけて。多くの文章は不完全だから、理解できなくて。
俺は一人で勉強するのが好きだ。人がいたら、集中できないから。