Snowy

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Beliaangel's latest journal entries Feb 09th 2010 12:43 sonw
There will be heavy snow in China these days.
It's snowing outside my room.
Seeing the snowflakes fall down silently is a beautiful leisurely thing.^^:
And I like walking in the snowy day.If can make a snowman with my friends is wonderful~
Though snowy is beautiful,the peopelo who want to get together with family before Spring Festival will face big difficulties.
Good luck to who is going home!
Feb 09th 2010 12:56 gon

sonw->snow
Feb 09th 2010 13:01 Beliaangel

^^:……擦汗……Thank you very much~
Feb 09th 2010 13:02 akira101

  • There will be heavy sonw in China these days.
  • There will be heavysnow in China these days.(拼错了

 

  • It's sonwing outside my room.
  • It's snowing outside my room.

 

  • Seeing the snowflakes fall down silently is a beautiful leisurely thing.
  • Seeing the snowflakes falling down silently is a beautiful leisurely thing.(不可以两个动词的)

 

  • If can make a snowman with my friends is wonderful~
  • 我改的比较多,见谅It would be so wonderful if I could make a snowman with my friends。

 
Feb 09th 2010 13:05 akira101

英语重逻辑,你的形合不够,可以试试写长一点点,就是and,but,however,as a result,构造不太复杂的复合句,尝试注重内在的逻辑会使您突飞猛进,祝学习语言乐趣斐然
Feb 09th 2010 13:06 Beliaangel

O(∩_∩)O~Thank you for correctting my mistakes~

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