Our Short Moive

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This semester I was too busy to write my English diary because I spend my time on making a moive with three classmates.
Our moive tell a love story in ancient China and the ending about the story is a little sad.
Please watch our moive and comment,thank you!^__^!~
Jul 01st 2011 18:37 Ges

  • This semester I was too busy to write my English diary because I spend my time on making a moive with three classmates.
  • This semester I was too busy to write in my English diary because I spent (most of/all of) my time on making a movie with three (of my) classmates.

 

  • Our moive tell a love story in ancient China and the ending about the story is a little sad.
  • Our moive /tells of/is about a love story in ancient China and the ending about the story is a little sad.

 
Although the dialog was too difficult for me I managed to get the gist. Here's my 2 cents worth: For an amateur movie I think it is pretty good. What gave it (away as an amateur movie) was the hairstyle/makeup/costume, some parts of the acting - dialog (voice and diction), and some movements, and the lack of people props in the palace. But overall the cinematography was quite good.
Jul 02nd 2011 22:08 Beliaangel
Ges,thanks for your comment very much!You are right excatly!If I have a scend time to make another moive, I will do better~^__^

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