Beliaangel
Last login: More than 3 days ago
- Native language
- Mandarin
- Learning
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English
Japanese
| ID |
114277 |
| Age |
22
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| Birthday |
10/13
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| Nation and region |
China
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| Sex |
Female
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| Occupation |
student
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55 / 500
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尚禮
- I did volunteer work in Dragon Spring Temple only for a whole day, not as long as our two days expectation.
- I did volunteer work at the Dragon Spring Temple only for the whole day,not for two days as I expected. (Is this what you want to say?)
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Jun 22nd 2010 19:43
Tasha
- Therefore, we prepared this exam almost this semester time.
- Therefore, we prepared for this exam almost all of this semester time.
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Jun 20th 2010 20:43
Sierra122
- I think I need have a rest this weekend~XD
- I think I need to have a rest this weekend~XD
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Mar 27th 2010 22:48
minkyleigh
- Beauty always leave just like fating of flowers.
- Beauty always fades just like the falling of flowers. ----> OR: "just like flowers wither and fall (die)."
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Mar 27th 2010 17:39
minkyleigh
- Watching his young and old face, I felt very sadness.
- Looking at his face when he was young and when he was old, I felt very sad. ---> OR "I felt great sadness." but "I felt very sad" is a better expression.
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Mar 27th 2010 17:38
LaoBai
- When I woke up, I almost felt I was in Dunhuang where is in Northwest of China and famous for the Mogao Grottoes.
- When I woke up, I almost felt I was in Dunhuang which is in the Northwest of China and famous for the Mogao Grottoes.
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Mar 21st 2010 15:50
尚禮
- The storm storm tell us that protect environment is how vital!!!
- The storm storm tells us just how vital protecting the environment is!
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Mar 21st 2010 15:50
LaoBai
- Today I finished my Art Management homework what made a invitation.
- Today I finished my Art Management homework which was to make an invitation.
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Mar 19th 2010 14:30
minkyleigh
- My work didn't like a invitation but blackboard newspaper T口T...
- The finished product didn't look like a invitation but like a blackboard newspaper T口T... ---> OR: "What I made didn't look like..." Also, I don't know what you mean by "blackboard newspaper."
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Mar 19th 2010 14:30
feld
- When I applied to my university the school said the Advertisement should study about theory but when I stuyied in the school our class closeing to design every semester.
- When I applied to my university, the school said that Advertising majors should study about theory. But what I study in classes is closer to design every semester. (The last part could be simplified to "But our classes spend more time on design" or "But our classes concentrate on design")
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Mar 06th 2010 20:08
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