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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Hajime's latest journal entries Mar 05th 2010 12:29
I see coffee makers in almost of all offices in US. Employee and visitor can drink free coffee. Sometimes there are snacks, sandwiches and drinks in a break room. I've never seen them in Japanese office. US is good country. :-)
Mar 05th 2010 12:55 adamlisbon

  • I see coffee makers in almost of all offices in US.
  • I see coffee makers in almost of all every office in the US.
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  • Employee and visitor can drink free coffee.
  • Employees and visitors can drink free coffee coffee for free.
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  • Sometimes there are snacks, sandwiches and drinks in a break room.
  • Sometimes there are snacks, sandwiches and drinks in the break room.
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  • I've never seen them in Japanese office.
  • I've never seen them in Japanese offices.
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  • US is good country.
  • The US is a good country.
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This is a very good short essay. 間違いが日本人にしては普通。

free coffeeも正しいけど、この場合は coffee for free のほうが自然だ。
英語の名詞の前に『a』や『the』や『some』をよく付く。
Mar 09th 2010 11:06 Hajime

Hi, adamlisbon

Thank you for correcting my journal. I tend to use 'a' and 'the' wrongly.... though I am trying to use them correctly.
Hajime
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