made 5 corrections for Coffee This is a very good short essay. 間違いが日本人にしては普通。
free coffeeも正しいけど、この場合は coffee for free のほうが自然だ。
英語の名詞の前に『a』や『the』や『some』をよく付く。
for Fort Worth Hi, 深縹
Thank you for your explanation. I did not know that his surname was William and he fought in the Mexican-American War.. I will ...
made 4 corrections for Pickup truck very true ... if you listen to country music, you're almost guaranteed to hear a mention of a pickup truck in 1 out of 5 songs (maybe eve...
for Pickup truck I live in Oklahoma, the state North of Texas. You are right! Texans do love big trucks. They love big trucks, even if they have nothing t...
for Rush Hour >深縹
Thank you for correction.
We will be tired before getting to work.
> niteowlz23
Yes. That's the one I was talking about!!
Feb 27th 2010 11:39
made 1 corrections for Fireplace "It is a momentary happiness" doesn't make sense really. "Momentary" means it finishes very quickly, so it implies th...
made 4 corrections for Rush Hour I've seen pictures of the Tokyo rush hour. I would not want to deal with that every morning and evening. Work is bad enough, getting to...
made 7 corrections for King Crab You cannot use 'another' in front of a PLURAL, only a singular noun. eg Another car, another house, another road; but NOT 'another cars, ...
for Temperature I think Celcius is not a very easy system to use, because the difference between 1 degree up or down on the celcius scale is not consista...
made 5 corrections for Temperature Because we're special :P But in all seriousness, we actually use the metric system and Celsius/Kelvin in science and math. It's just that...
for Diving show Hi, Niteowlz23
Thank you for correcting my journal and explanation.
Cancun is not far from here. Everybody say it is good place to go...
Hi, aoiahiru Thank you for correcting my journal and explanation.
Hi, adamlisbon Thank you for correcting my journal. I tend to use 'a' and 'the' wrongly.... though I am trying to use them correctly.
This is a very good short essay. 間違いが日本人にしては普通。 free coffeeも正しいけど、この場合は coffee for free のほうが自然だ。 英語の名詞の前に『a』や『the』や『some』をよく付く。
Hi, kaydee I did not know that Texas woman's hair. I will check their hair... Hi, GarbloJones Thank you for correcting my journa...
Hi, 深縹 Thank you for your explanation. I did not know that his surname was William and he fought in the Mexican-American War.. I will ...
上司のアメリカ人（テキサス人）もカウガールみたいな人です。。
Cowgirlって本当にいるのですか！ スーパーガールみたいなもんだと思ってました…。
very true ... if you listen to country music, you're almost guaranteed to hear a mention of a pickup truck in 1 out of 5 songs (maybe eve...
I live in Oklahoma, the state North of Texas. You are right! Texans do love big trucks. They love big trucks, even if they have nothing t...
Hi, clockradio Thank you for your comment. Yes. Cowgirl museum at Ft Worth in Texas..
A cowgirl museum?
Hi Ben Bullock Thank you for your correction and explanation. It is helpful.
>深縹 Thank you for correction. We will be tired before getting to work. > niteowlz23 Yes. That's the one I was talking about!!
"It is a momentary happiness" doesn't make sense really. "Momentary" means it finishes very quickly, so it implies th...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0A9-oUoMug WOW!
I've seen pictures of the Tokyo rush hour. I would not want to deal with that every morning and evening. Work is bad enough, getting to...
> periko 春 もうすぐですね。楽しみ。 > retropunk Thank you for your comments. It's helpful. > Hana 今年は、どこもすごく寒かったですね。少しずつ、春の兆しが見えてきま...
Nick.Tim & Natsukashi Thank you for your comments!! It's helpful.
関西は今日は20℃もありました。 私もBBQ大好きです！ 日本でできるのはまだまだ先だなぁ…。
It was a pleasant writing. Enjoy yourself!.
Good luck with your studies! Blue = suggestions Red = corrections.
こんにちは～ 今日はとてもいい天気ですね。 わたしは御久しぶりの太陽様が大好きです。 はるもうすぐ～
> Sock Thank you for collecting my journal.
> jacklonn Thank you for comment and explanation. It helps my understanding!
> Dorielf Thank you for your information. I will check my quarters. > Japan_is_neat Thank you for your suggestion. Howev...
You can tell which mint produced a coin by the coin's "mint mark." I believe the mint mark should be to one side of the preside...
Hi, Dorielf I do not know where these coins were made. How do you know which Mint created a coin?
Hi Aoiahiru If you use 5円 for an offing at the shrine, your wish may come true. The pronunciation of 5円 and ご縁 is the same so people ...
> periko 昔台湾に行ったことあるから、もしかしたら台湾のコイン、家の中にあるかも。
Thank you everybody for checking my journal.
You cannot use 'another' in front of a PLURAL, only a singular noun. eg Another car, another house, another road; but NOT 'another cars, ...
I also collect state quarters. All the ones I have are from the Denver Mint. Do you knowwhere yours are from? Good luck with your coin...
> Hana さん ダイビング楽しいですよ。一度海にはいったら、陸に上がりたくなくなります。：）
わぁ！Hajimeさんはダイバーさんだったんですか！！ もしかしたら私も今年はダイバーデビューするかもしれません。 マナティーのいるような海には行けそうにないですが…。 （全部日本語でごめんなさいｗ）
If you have a １円玉 from Taiwan, isn't that like イイ縁？ Anyway, that's what my Taiwanese friend said! ^.^ P.s. I have a coin collection to...
Hajime さん： 面白い趣味ですね。 台湾のcoinsの趣味をもっていませんか？
Good job! Aside from some grammatical errors, your English is nice.
Good job. Matthew Florida, USA
Thank you for your comment! Yes.. It was a so sad day. :-)
Thank you everyone. I need to be used to it anyway... Today is 54F = 12C in Dallas. It is cool but getting warmer recently.
I think Celcius is not a very easy system to use, because the difference between 1 degree up or down on the celcius scale is not consista...
I'm not sure. I think Australia uses it, too!
Because we're special :P But in all seriousness, we actually use the metric system and Celsius/Kelvin in science and math. It's just that...
Hi, Niteowlz23 Thank you for correcting my journal and explanation. Cancun is not far from here. Everybody say it is good place to go...
家族がダイビングをするので、よく 写真を見せてもらうんですけれど、本当に、 海中の生物って不思議な物が多いですよね～。 今回のショーはHajimeさんがダイビングを始める きっかけになりそうですか？ｗ
That sounds pretty cool. You should check out Cancun, I heard it's dope.
Thank you everybody. It was a fun day of shopping.
I also love going to sales where people absolutely have to get rid of their stuff. :D
Hi, ブリタニー Thank you for correcting my journal. ちょっと飲みすぎました。でも、もう大丈夫です。 Hi, Mad Man Thank you for correcting my journal.
Hi, Kammy Thank you for correcting my journal. Hi, Periko とても寒かったです。雪だるまはもう解けてしまいました。