Registration Message in Korean

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Dear whom it may concern,


This is XXX (my lang-8 id is phlow).

The idea of 'lang-8' is really awesome. :)
I know receiving collection is the best way to improve language skill.

I joined lang-8 recently and received 'registration confirmation message' in Korean.
It was glad to receive message in Korean but I also noticed that is was generated using language translator.
(I know that this email may be awkward to you because English is not my native language.)

So, I uploaded your original 'registration message' I have received and corrected it using comment.
I really thank for your effort to serve Korean language menu and email. :-)
http://lang-8.com/115402/journals/359170/lang-8-등록-완료-메일
For you information, my native language is Korean and my Korean writing is quite nice. :)

Maybe it is trivial problem but generating the not-collected message
might be ridiculous that even if lang-8 is language correcting site.

Thank your for your great idea and its realization.

Regards,

XXX
Feb 08th 2010 23:24 한민아

  • Dear whom it may concern,
  • To whom it may concern,

 

  • I know receiving collection is the best way to improve language skill.
  • I know that receiving corrections is the best way to improve language skills.

 

  • I joined lang-8 recently and received 'registration confirmation message' in Korean.
  • I joined lang-8 recently and received a registration confirmation message in Korean.

 

  • It was glad to receive message in Korean but I also noticed that is was generated using language translator.
  • It was glad to receive a message in Korean, but I also noticed that it was generated using language an online translator.

 

  • (I know that this email may be awkward to you because English is not my native language.)
  • (I know that This email may be awkward to you because English is not my native language.)

 

  • So, I uploaded your original 'registration message' I have received and corrected it using comment.
  • So, I uploaded your original registration message I have received and corrected it using comments.

 

  • I really thank for your effort to serve Korean language menu and email.
  • I am really thankful for your effort to serve make a Korean language menu and emails available.

 

  • For you information, my native language is Korean and my Korean writing is quite nice.
  • For you information, my native language is Korean, and my Korean writing is quite nice.

 

  • Maybe it is trivial problem but generating the not-collected message
  • Maybe it is a trivial problem, but generating the non-corrected message

 

  • might be ridiculous that even if lang-8 is language correcting site.
  • might be ridiculous, considering that even if lang-8 is a language correcting site.

 

  • Thank your for your great idea and its realization.
  • Thank your for your great idea and its realization.

 
This was very well written!
You're very good at English =]
There weren't very many things to correct ^^
Feb 09th 2010 10:03 Ryan

민아, it's so kind of you. I am flattered. :-)
Thank you for your corrections.
Ryan
  • Korean
  • English, German

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