could you help me to correct my mistakes in english?
Feb 04th 2010 13:20
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I have had a heroine during all my life. She is a meek, sensible, and lovely woman, she has much beautiful qualities as woman. She is thin, short, she has red hair, she has brown eyes and she is fifty-one years old. She is housekeeper and all her life she has been hard working. She is very responsible, honest, and is very tidy in hers homework.
She has been my heroine because she has always been with me in all the moments that I have needed, in good and bad moments. She has given me advices and opinions about the situations or decisions in my life.
She has taught me many things, for example I remember that in my childhood, she helped me to do my homework every day and she took care of me because I was sick almost all time.
She is a great woman, she is my mother.
I have had a heroine during all my life. She is a meek, sensible, and lovely woman, she has much beautiful qualities as woman. She is thin, short, she has red hair, she has brown eyes and she is fifty-one years old. She is housekeeper and all her life she has been hard working. She is very responsible, honest, and is very tidy in hers homework.
She has been my heroine because she has always been with me in all the moments that I have needed, in good and bad moments. She has given me advices and opinions about the situations or decisions in my life.
She has taught me many things, for example I remember that in my childhood, she helped me to do my homework every day and she took care of me because I was sick almost all time.
She is a great woman, she is my mother.
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I have had the same heroine during all my whole life.
She is a meek, sensible, and lovely woman. She has many beautiful qualities as a woman.
She is thin and short. She has red hair. She has brown eyes, and she is fifty-one years old.
She is a housekeeper and all her life she has been a hard-worker. [[She is a housekeeper and has worked hard her whole life.]]
She is very responsible, honest, and is very tidy in her homework. own house too. ("Homework" is assigned at a school or class. You could say instead that "she keeps her house tidy")
She has been my heroine my whole life because she has always been with me in all the moments that I have needed her, in both the good and bad moments.
She has given me advices and opinions about the situations or decisions in my life.
She has taught me many things. For example I remember that in my childhood, she helped me to do my homework every day and she took care of me because I was sick almost all the time.
She is a great woman. She is my mother.
I have had a heroine during all of my life.
She is very responsible, honest, and is very tidy in her homework. housework.
She has taught me many things. For example I remember that in my childhood, she helped me to do my homework every day and she took care of me because I was sick almost all of the time.
Good luck!
I have had one heroine for my entire life.
She is thin and short, she has red hair and brown eyes and she is fifty-one years old.
She is a housekeeper and she has been a hard-worker all her life.