Here is a song I wrote just now

Here is a song I wrote just now.
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TITLE: Sleeping Now , Peaceful Face

Have you finished your work today ?

O , I see .

Have a rest , softly you lay .

Sleeping now , peaceful face .


That you dreamt and told a story .

O , I see .

'bout paradise , shined its glory .

Be still now , calm your tiring .


Have you finished your work today ?

O , I see .

Have a rest , softly you lay .

Sleeping now , peaceful face .