Some sentences

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Feb 07th 2010 14:14

So, these are some sentences I wrote for homework.
Correct it, uh? ^_^

I saw an elderly couple came in with a little girl in a wheelchair.

All of a sudden it disappeared.

Men supply trees for wood and other products.

For where there are trees, their roots break up soil ---allowing the rain to pour in ---and also bind the soil.

The rain falls on huge ground and flows away.
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That's all.
Thank you!

Feb 07th 2010 14:43 Mochichan88

English
Mandarin , Korean

Correct it, uh?
Correct it, uh? (Should say please)

I saw an elderly couple came in with a little girl in a wheelchair.
I saw an elderly couple camecomein with a little girl in a wheelchair.

For where there are trees, their roots break up soil ---allowing the rain to pour in ---and also bind the soil.
For where there areTree, their roots break up thesoil ---allowing the rain to pourseepin ---andwhichalso binds the soil. (I think this is what you were trying to say...)

The rain falls on huge ground and flows away.
The rain falls on hugetheground and flows away.

Feb 07th 2010 15:57 kaschka

English
Mandarin , German , Spanish , Japanese , Tagalog , French

So, these are some sentences I wrote for homework.
So, these are some sentences I wrote for homework. (Or "...here are some sentences...")

Correct it, uh?
Correct them it, uh? ("Can you correct them for me?")

For where there are trees, their roots break up soil ---allowing the rain to pour in ---and also bind the soil.
For where there are trees, their Tree roots break up soil, allowing (the) rain to pour in, and which also binds the soil.