Happiness
Feb 15th 2010 02:11
I am happy when snowing. It's white, white. Then it's shining on the earth. I am happy when I am glad.That's all. Of course I should say many. But it's difficult as I say.
What makes you HAPPY?
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Feb 15th 2010 02:26
Alby
I'm happy when it's snowing outside, but I'm warm inside drinking some hot cocoa.
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- It's very difficult question.
- It's a very difficult question.
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- But I am going to answer.
- But I am going to answer it. (You don't technically need the "it" here but it sounds more natural to me)
1 people think this correction is good.
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- It's funny!!!
- It's funny!!! (Do you really mean it's funny or do you mean it's fun?)
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- Also I have a happy when take good marks, especially 5.
- I'm also happy when I get good marks, especially 5.
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- I am happy when snowing.
- I am happy when it snows.
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- Then it's shining on the earth.
- Then it's shining on the ground.
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- I am happy when I am glad.
- I am happy when I am glad. (lol)
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- Of course I should say many.
- Of course I should mention many more. (I think that's what you're trying to say)
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- But it's difficult as I say.
- But it's difficult to say.
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Feb 15th 2010 02:39
niteowlz23
That is a hard question! I think writing a good poem, reading a good book, sunny days, being with friends and home-cooked food all make me happy, but so do many other things! It's good to live life savoring the details that it presents.
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- It's very difficult question.
- It's a very difficult question.
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- But I am going to answer.
- ButHowever, I am going to answer it. ("but" is a conjunction that is normally placed in the middle of a sentence. What are you going to answer? It.)
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- So, I'm happy when my friends visit me.
- So, I'm happy when my friends visit me.
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- Also I have a happy when take good marks, especially 5.
- Also, I have a am happy when I take get (or receive) good marks, especially 5's. ("marks" and 5's are both plural.)
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- Mark 2 is bad.=(
- Mark 2 is bad.=(
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- I am happy when snowing.
- I am happy when it is snowing.
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- It's white, white.
- It's white, white.
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- Then it's shining on the earth.
- Then, it shines on the earth (or ground).
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- I am happy when I am glad.
- I am happy when I am glad. (This sentence is tricky...You can say, "Being happy makes me glad," which is grammatically correct. However, it's redundant. You may use "I like to be happy" or "I like to be glad" instead. Who doesn't like to be happy? :))
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- Of course I should say many.
- Of course, I should saytalk about many more things (that make me happy),
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- But it's difficult as I say.
- but it's difficult as I said.
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