The secret of traveling

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Feb 06th 2010 05:17

I think no body doesn't like traveling. I've never met someone who said I don't like traveling.

But why so people like traveling?

I think The reason why people like traveling is that we long for unreality.

Traveling give us not only watching but also real experience.

That's why we cannot stop to go traveling.

And I will go to South America in next month.

See you!

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Feb 06th 2010 05:58 Dan

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French , Spanish

The secret of traveling
The Secret of Traveling

I think no body doesn't like traveling.
I don't think anybody dislikes travelling

I've never met someone who said I don't like traveling.
I've never met anyone who's said "I don't like travelling"

But why so people like traveling?
But why do so many people like travelling?

I think The reason why people like traveling is that we long for unreality.
I think the reason why people like travelling is because we long for unreality

Traveling give us not only watching but also real experience.
Travelling gives us not only vision but also real experience

That's why we cannot stop to go traveling.
That's why we cannot stop going travelling

And I will go to South America in next month.
And I'm going to South America next month.

Feb 12th 2010 04:41 Tasseled

Russian
Japanese , French

I think no body doesn't like traveling.
I think everybody likes travelling.

I've never met someone who said I don't like traveling.
I've never met anyone who said they didn't like travelling.

But why so people like traveling?
But why do so many people like to travel?

I think The reason why people like traveling is that we long for unreality.
I think the reason why people like travelling is that we long for a dream.

Traveling give us not only watching but also real experience.
However, travelling give us not onlya vision,but also real experience.

That's why we cannot stop to go traveling.
That's why we cannot stop travelling.

And I will go to South America in next month.
And I am going to South America next month.

*"I think no body doesn't like traveling" - instead of double negative, it's better to use a positive like "I think everybody likes travelling".

*Try replacing "travelling" with "to travel" or "it" in some sentences to give it some flow and eliminate repetitiveness.

*The word "unreality" didn't sound very natural to me, so I suggest using "a dream". To connect the two sentences with the same idea I inserted "however".

*Also try not to start a sentence with "And".

Good luck!