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I got an iPhone 3GS!

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of katti's latest journal entries Aug 14th 2009 16:27 iphone
I got an iPhone3GS July 29th.
But my family had trouble, so I had to solved it immediatelly.
If I had had time, I could have used the iPhone.
But now at last I have a lot of time to learn how to use it.
Thefore I'm writing this entry by using it in order to learn how to use.
Apple's technorogy is amazing but I haven't yet known how to search words and writing it at the same time.
I haven't been used to writing English without dictionary.
Could you teach, If I make mistakes.
Thank you for reading!!
Aug 14th 2009 16:46 hikaru1412
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  • Japanese, Korean

  • I got an iPhone3GS July 29th.
  • I got an iPhone3GS on July 29th.
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  • But my family had trouble, so I had to solved it immediatelly.
  • But my family had trouble, so I had to solved it the problem immediatelly.
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  • Thefore I'm writing this entry by using it in order to learn how to use.
  • Thefore I'm writing this entry by using it with my iPhone in order to learn how to use it.
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  • Apple's technorogy is amazing but I haven't yet known how to search words and writing it at the same time.
  • Apple's technorogy is amazing but I haven't yet known to learn how to search look up words and writinge it at the same time.
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  • I haven't been used to writing English without dictionary.
  • I haven't been am not used to writing in English without a dictionary.
1 people think this correction is good. Comment  
  • Could you teach, If I make mistakes.
  • Could you teach tell me if I have made any mistakes?
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Pretty good for not using a dictionary. In the sixth sentence you can use search for instead of look up, but I thought it would be more natural to say look up since you were talking about looking up a word in an online dictionary, right? Also in the second to last sentence you could say "Tell me if I have made any mistakes!^^" instead of asking a question. Just the writer's preference.　頑張って続けてください！＾＾（Keep up the good work!^^)
Aug 14th 2009 22:56 Mr. Wallet
  • English
  • Japanese

  • Apple's technorogy is amazing but I haven't yet known how to search words and writing it at the same time.
  • Apple's technology is amazing but I haven't yet learned how to search for words and write at the same time.
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Aug 15th 2009 10:57 katti
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  • English

Thanks for corrections!
It is easy for me to read your comments and corrections.
So, it helps me to study English a lot.
katti
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