maikeru

• But experts say earthquakes will continue to happen for sometime, and I feel a little uneasy.
• But experts say earthquakes will continue to happen for some time, and I feel a little uneasy.

maikeru

• Most of their magnitude lower level 3 or 4, so there isn't damage in this area.
• Most of their magnitudes are lower than level 3 or 4, so there isn't any damage in this area.

maikeru

• We have a lot of earthquakes recently in the Kanto region where I'm living, Japan.
• We have had a lot of earthquakes recently in the Kanto region of Japan where I'm living, Japan.

Mr. Wallet

• Apple's technorogy is amazing but I haven't yet known how to search words and writing it at the same time.
• Apple's technology is amazing but I haven't yet learned how to search for words and write at the same time.

hikaru1412
Pretty good for not using a dictionary. In the sixth sentence you can use search for instead of look up, but I thought it would be more natural to say look up since you were talking about looking up a word in an online dictionary, right?...

hikaru1412

• Apple's technorogy is amazing but I haven't yet known how to search words and writing it at the same time.
• Apple's technorogy is amazing but I haven't yet known to learn how to search look up words and writinge it at the same time.

hikaru1412

• I got an iPhone3GS July 29th.
• I got an iPhone3GS on July 29th.

ｼﾞｬｽ

• When I happened to went to mobile phone shop yesterday, I found an iphone laid for customer who wants to experience its operation.
• When I happened to go to a mobile phone shop yesterday, I found an iphone laid out for customers to try out.

ｼﾞｬｽ

• I thought I knew how wonderful iphone is, but when I saw those movies I was surprised at smooth and useful of its operation.
• I thought I knew how wonderful the iphone was, but when I saw those movies I was surprised at how smooth and useful it is.

Xempt

• I didn't believe it was mobile phone.
• I didn't believe it was a mobile phone.