Today's three happiness and three unhappiness

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Feb 08th 2010 23:17

Today is Monday which is called the most melancholy day in a week for working person.

But I'm happy for the three things which were happend for me. First, I had a presentation in front of board of directors of my company and it was not so bad. On my 'fair' rating, it's 75 points of 100 points, which is 25 points behind from my perfect presentation. It's not bad. Second, the new commer who started working for us from today is seems good at work. Third, my wife made a dinner for me when I came back to my home.

And I had three bad things. First, the battery of my mobile phone, iPhone, fell down to flat while working time. I thought it was because of an application, Byline, RSS reader. Second, I was unhappy for the insufficiency for my presentation. It was my fault for 'my' management of just 'my' time. Third, I had a little studying time bacause of a drink party for the new commer.

Third one,... I will execuse me for the third one, because I read an economicnewspaper.

今日は社会人には憂鬱な月曜でした.
会社幹部の前での発表の機会があり、それなりに上手くいったこと(75点. -25点は自己反省点)、今日から新しく会社にやってきた方がしっかりしていて色々任せられそうなこと、帰宅したら妻が食事を作ってくれていたこと、はよかった点。

悪かったのは、iPhoneのバッテリが切れたり(おそらく Byline というアプリケーションのせい)、発表で正直準備不足があったこと、飲み会で遅く帰りすぎて勉強不十分になったこと。経済雑誌を読んだのでよしとするか。

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Feb 10th 2010 14:12 ian

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Today's three happiness and three unhappiness
Today's three things of happiness and three of unhappiness

Today is Monday which is called the most melancholy day in a week for working person.
Today is Monday, which is called the most melancholic day of the week for a working person.

But I'm happy for the three things which were happend for me.
But I'm happy for the three things which have happened to me today.

First, I had a presentation in front of board of directors of my company and it was not so bad.
First, I gave a presentation in front of the board of directors of my company and it was not so bad.

On my 'fair' rating, it's 75 points of 100 points, which is 25 points behind from my perfect presentation.
My 'fair' rating ended up being 75 points of 100 points, which is 25 points short of a perfect presentation.

It's not bad.
It's not bad at all.

Second, the new commer who started working for us from today is seems good at work.
Second, the new employee who has started working for us from today is seems to be good at his/her work.

Third, my wife made a dinner for me when I came back to my home.
Third, my wife made a dinner//my wife made a delicious dinner for me when I came back to my home.

And I had three bad things.
Unfortunately, I also had three bad things happen to me.

First, the battery of my mobile phone, iPhone, fell down to flat while working time.
First, my iPhone's battery died while at work.

I thought it was because of an application, Byline, RSS reader.
I thought it was because of an application, Byline, or RSS reader.

Second, I was unhappy for the insufficiency for my presentation.
Second, I was unhappy because of the insufficiency of my presentation.

It was my fault for 'my' management of just 'my' time.
It was my fault for managing my time the way I did. (I wasn't 100% sure what you were trying to say here, so I guessed)

Third, I had a little studying time bacause of a drink party for the new commer.
Third, I only got a little bit of studying time because of the party for the new employee.

I will execuse me for the third one, because I read an economicnewspaper.
Well, on second thought, maybe the third one wasn't so bad considering I did get to read an economics newspaper. (It was difficult trying to capture what you were trying to express with your sentence, but I think this is about as close as I can get! ^^; )

Nice work :D