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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of marich's latest journal entries Feb 14th 2010 18:09
Yesterday,I saw the opening ceremony of the Winter Olympics on TV .
It was very fantastic.
The whale appeared. It was so beautiful.
I was seen only on the way,because I must go out.

I’ll be rooting for Japanese players!

昨日、オリンピックの開幕式をTVで観ました。
とっても幻想的でした。
クジラが出てきて、とってもきれいでした。
出かけなければいけなかったので、途中までしか観られませんでしたが。。

日本の選手たちを応援しています！



Feb 14th 2010 18:23 casamares
  • Polish
  • English, German

Yes, the ceremony was awsome!
Feb 14th 2010 20:18 marich
  • Japanese
  • English

@casamares
Yes! A person all over the world was looking!
Feb 17th 2010 09:14 Alex
  • English
  • Japanese, Cantonese

  • It was very fantastic.
  • It was very fantastic. ("very fantastic" sounds strange... maybe "truly fantastic" or "very exciting" is better)
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  • The whale appeared.
  • A whale appeared. (Too short... something like "There was even a whale." is better)
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  • I was seen only on the way,because I must go out.
  • Unfortunately I didn't see the whole ceremony because I had to go out.
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  • I’ll be rooting for Japanese players!
  • I’ll be rooting for the Japanese players!
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I'll be rooting for the Australians :)
marich
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  • English

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