Marriage unexpectedly

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Once upon a time there was a prince in a rich kingdom.
His father, the king wanted him to marry. He gave him the freedom
to marry any girl he likes on condition that she would be a princess.
the prince travelled around the kingdom searching for a princess.
he met a lot of beautiful girls who said they were from royal families.
when he made inquiries, he found out they weren't telling the truth.

أe went back to the palace and was very sad because he didn't succeed in finding a suitable wife .his parents were also sad for his failure.
the next evening ,there was a terrible storm.The sky was cloudy
and lightening flashed .it was raining heavily.

suddenly, they heard a loud knock on the palace door .the solider in
charge of the door opened it. He found a beautiful girl at the door.
she was wet and cold .she told him that she was a princess and asked him if she could find shelter in the palace. The soldier took the girl
to the queen who wanted to make a sure that she was really
a princess.

she ordered the servant to make a bed for her and put a pea under the mattress .her mother had told her that any princess couldn't sleep
if there was a pea under her mattress.

The next morning, the queen asked the girl how she slept.
The girl complained that she couldn't sleep because there was
something in the bed that made it uncomfortable .the queen was happy to find a beautiful princess in her palace.
the princess happily greed to marry the unexpected princess.

unexpected story.
i think it is not happen in our normal life or it happen but with another
shape such as the person search more time for a good wife but in the
end he married a girl that he don't expect to married her.
it happen also to girls not men only.

i say about the meaning of the story not the events.
May 09th 2010 06:46 john

  • Marriage unexpectedly
  • Unexpected marriage Or Marrying Unexpectedly.

 

  • His father, the king wanted him to marry.
  • His father, the king, wanted him to get married.

 

  • to marry any girl he likes on condition that she would be a princess.
  • to marry any girl he liked on the condition that she would be a princess.

 

  • the prince travelled around the kingdom searching for a princess.
  • The prince traveled around the kingdom searching for a princess.

 

  • he met a lot of beautiful girls who said they were from royal families.
  • He met a lot of beautiful girls who said they were from royal families.

 

  • when he made inquiries, he found out they weren't telling the truth.
  • When he made inquiries, he found out they weren't telling the truth.

 

  • أe went back to the palace and was very sad because he didn't succeed in finding a suitable wife .
  • He went back to the palace and was very sad, because he didn't succeed in finding a suitable wife .

 

  • his parents were also sad for his failure.
  • His parents were also sad for his failure.

 

  • the next evening ,there was a terrible storm.
  • The next evening, there was a terrible storm.

 

  • and lightening flashed .
  • and lightening flashed.

 

  • it was raining heavily.
  • It was raining heavily.

 

  • suddenly, they heard a loud knock on the palace door .
  • Suddenly, they heard a loud knock on the palace door.

 

  • the solider in
  • The soldier in

 

  • she was wet and cold .
  • She was all wet and very cold.

 

  • she told him that she was a princess and asked him if she could find shelter in the palace.
  • She told him that she was a princess and asked him if she could find shelter in the palace.

 

  • she ordered the servant to make a bed for her and put a pea under the mattress .
  • She ordered the servant to make a bed for her and put a pea under the mattress.

 

  • her mother had told her that any princess couldn't sleep
  • Her mother had told her that no princess could sleep

 

  • if there was a pea under her mattress.
  • if there was a pea under her mattress.

 

  • something in the bed that made it uncomfortable .
  • something in the bed that made it uncomfortable.

 

  • the queen was happy to find a beautiful princess in her palace.
  • The queen was happy to find a beautiful princess in her palace.

 

  • the princess happily greed to marry the unexpected princess.
  • The princess happily agreed to marry the unexpected princess.

 

  • unexpected story.
  • An unexpected story.

 

  • i think it is not happen in our normal life or it happen but with another
  • This may may not happen in our normal lives or maybe something similar has happened.

 

  • shape such as the person search more time for a good wife but in the
  • shape For instance, a person might search for a good wife, but in the

 

  • end he married a girl that he don't expect to married her.
  • end he marries a girl he didn't expect to marry.

 

  • it happen also to girls not men only.
  • This might also happen to girls and not just men.

 

  • i say about the meaning of the story not the events.
  • It is the meaning behind the story rather than the literal events.

 
May 09th 2010 08:18 semsema eltawil

thanks John
May 11th 2010 05:37 mohammed

  • Marriage unexpectedly
  • Since it is the title of a fairytale, it would be better to write: An unexpected marriage

 

  • أe went back to the palace and was very sad because he didn't succeed in finding a suitable wife .
  • Alternatives:He wasn't able to find a suitable wife.He didn't manage to find a suitable wife.He was unsuccessful in finding a suitable wife.

 

  • to the queen who wanted to make a sure that she was really
  • to the queen who wanted to make a sure that she really was a princess

 

  • i think it is not happen in our normal life or it happen but with another
  • I do not think that this usually happens in our normal lives. It is more likely that the person searches longer for a good wife, but in the end marries a girl he did not expect to marry.

 
Very good text. Keep on keeping on!

My additions are (except for one) alternatives to what you have wrote, since John already made corrections.
May 14th 2010 08:37 semsema eltawil

thanks Mohammed

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