iPhone or android?

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of ark's latest journal entries Jan 25th 2012 08:30
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I read this good entry. By the time I read it I would like to another topic, but I want to write it.
I like apple's devices. Making software and hardware by the same maker is good thing. I use Mac and iPod touch. These are very comfortable. Because it is useful. I use drag and drop on macintosh.
Jan 25th 2012 12:39 S-in-Japan

  • By the time I read it I would like to another topic, but I want to write it.
  • By the time I read it I wanted to write? another topic, but I want to write it. I'm not sure what you want to say.

 

  • Making software and hardware by the same maker is good thing.
  • Making software and hardware by the same maker is a good thing.

 
Jan 25th 2012 12:41 S-in-Japan
Be careful with tense.

"By the time I read (PAST) it I would like (FUTURE) to another topic, but I want to write (FUTURE) it.

You start the sentence in the past so it should continue in the past.
Jan 25th 2012 22:13 ark
Yes, I "wanted" to write so.
Thank you for correction, and your entry is interesting.
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