Twenty second day -playing the piano-

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 This evening my wife was playing the piano for Yuma. She is a public nursery staff. She plays the piano at her work. Yuma played it ,too. As for him, a piano is as a drum. He beaten the piano very well.
Mar 03rd 2010 04:12 Kitty

  • She is a public nursery staff.
  • She is part of the staff at a public nursery. (or 'She is a public nursery staff member')

 

  • As for him, a piano is as a drum.
  • In his eyes, a piano is a drum.

 

  • He beaten the piano very well.
  • He beat the piano very well.

 
^^ Yuma sounds like such a cutie! :D I'm sure he'll grow to be a good piano player if he wants to! haha
Mar 03rd 2010 11:54 violetize

  • She is a public nursery staff.
  • She is a public nursery staff member.

 

  • As for him, a piano is as a drum.
  • As For him, a piano is like a drum.

 

  • He beaten the piano very well.
  • He beat the piano very well.

 
Heehee! Cute!
Mar 03rd 2010 22:12 tomoki01

Thank you for your correction, Kitty and violetize.
Today Yuma wanted to play the piano. He asked his mother to bring the piano by Yuma. He beat the piano! I wish he becoms a good piano player.
Mar 03rd 2010 22:21 kelsa

  • She is a public nursery staff.
  • She is part of the staff at a public nursery. ((Or you could say "She works at a public nursery." ))

 
"He beat the piano very well." <---- This was a very good sentence!! Very visually descriptive!!
Mar 03rd 2010 22:22 tomoki01

Thank you for your correction and comment,kelsa. He loves beating something very much.

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