24th day - I'm in parents' home now. -

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Mar 05th 2010 00:00

I worked overtime until 9 pm. so I went back to my parents' home. I work in Iga city. I am from Iga city. so My parents' home is In Iga city.
My father and mother live here. My brother's familiy lives near there. My father and brother run a builder's office together. My mother was a elementary school teacher once.Now she helps their work. I am writing this diary on my parents' pc at their office.
I had hand-rolled sushi dinner. I put Sashimi, fried eggs, imitation crab meat or cucumbers on rice. I rolled them. Its delicious. but I had too much.

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Mar 05th 2010 02:49 Eiljiah

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24th day - I'm in parents' home now. -
24th day - I'm in at my parents' home now. -

so My parents' home is In Iga city.
so my parents' home is in Iga city.

Now she helps their work.
Now she helps them in their work.

I am writing this diary on my parents' pc at their office.
I am writing this diary on using (OR: with)my parents' pc at their office.

I had hand-rolled sushi dinner.
I had hand-rolled sushi for dinner.

I put Sashimi, fried eggs, imitation crab meat or cucumbers on rice.
I put Sashimi, fried eggs, imitation crab meat or and cucumbers on rice.

Its delicious.
Its was delicious.

but I had too much.
but I had too much of it.

Great job! Few pointers to help you understand my corrections:

1. (at vs in): "I'm at home now" vs "Walking around in the house." However, if you are talking about location as in city/province/country, you say "in". Eg. "I'm in Japan now" vs "I'm at the company now".

2. (help): You can only help "a person", you cannot help an inanimate object such as work. That's why I wrote help them (father & brother) in their work

3. (or vs and): "or" means you can choose whether to put it in or not to but "and" means you are putting all of those on the rice.

Hope you understood my explanations! Continue to work hard!!! :)