25th day - Yuma takes a bath -

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Mar 05th 2010 22:50 bath toy clockwork

Yuma usually takes a bath with me. He loves bath very much. I say that " Let's take a bath Yuma". He smiles a sweet smile. He play bath toys - animal shape water gun and clockwork turtle toy-. I clean his body and his head. He doesn't like cleaning his head.　When I clean his head, He screams. I finish cleaning him. I call my wife to bath room.She catch up Yuma, and she dry off his body.So she brush his teeth,then she get his to bed.
Now Yuma is sleeping. My wife is watching the TV. We enjoy free time.

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Mar 06th 2010 00:25 kelsa

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He loves bath very much.
He loves baths very much. ((OR He loves taking baths very much))

He play bath toys - animal shape water gun and clockwork turtle toy-.
He plays with bath toys like an animal shaped water gun and a clockwork turtle toy-.

He doesn't like cleaning his head.
He doesn't like having his head cleaned.

When I clean his head, He screams.
When I clean his head, he screams.

I finish cleaning him.
When I finish cleaning him, ((connect with next sentence))

I call my wife to bath room.
I call my wife to the bathroom.

She catch up Yuma, and she dry off his body.
She picks up Yuma, and she dries off his body.

So she brush his teeth,then she get his to bed.
Next she brushes his teeth, then she puts him to bed.

Now Yuma is sleeping.
Now Yuma is sleeping. ((To fit grammatically with the rest of the entry, this sentence needs to be in the same verb tense. You could say, "Yuma sleeps while my wife watches the TV))