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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Judy's latest journal entries Feb 12th 2010 21:02
Today I read several diaries that are about they get sick.I think I have the responsity to remind you,my friends,to pay more attention to your health.Personly , I insisit the fact that health is the first. If you are sick ,you will miss a lot of things.In winter ,it is common for us to get cold,have fever,cough and so on.It makes you feel uncomfortable.I have a suggestion that you should drink more hot water,especially when you get cold. According to traditional Chinese medical science, hot water can driver the cold away. Also, it is known to all that we should drink 8 bottle of water. So it is active.In a word, we should drink more hot water.
Feb 13th 2010 01:40 sunflower187
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  • Mandarin, English

  • Today I read several diaries that are about they get sick.
  • Today I read several diaries about they get sick.
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  • I think I have the responsity to remind you,my friends,to pay more attention to your health.
  • I think I have the responsebillity to remind you,my friends,to pay more attention to your health.
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  • Personly , I insisit the fact that health is the first.
  • Personly , I insist the fact that health is the first.
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  • If you are sick ,you will miss a lot of things.
  • If you get sick ,you will miss a lot of things.
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  • According to traditional Chinese medical science, hot water can driver the cold away.
  • According to traditional Chinese medical science, hot water can drive the cold away.
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我只修改了我会知道的。写的可以。
我感冒了。我听你的话来会试试你的方法。
我认为，作文越错越对我有帮助。
我不怕写错的。啊啊啊。
晚安`
Feb 13th 2010 09:23 beanie.bop
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  • Japanese

  • Today I read several diaries that are about they get sick.
  • Today I read several diaries that are about people who have gotten sick.
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  • I think I have the responsity to remind you,my friends,to pay more attention to your health.
  • I think I have a responsibility to remind you, my friends, to pay more attention to your health.
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  • Personly , I insisit the fact that health is the first.
  • Personally, I insist that health comes first.
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  • In winter ,it is common for us to get cold,have fever,cough and so on.
  • In winter, it is common for us to get a cold, have a fever, cough and so on.
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  • I have a suggestion that you should drink more hot water,especially when you get cold.
  • I have a suggestion: you should drink more hot water, especially when you get a cold.
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  • According to traditional Chinese medical science, hot water can driver the cold away.
  • According to traditional Chinese medical science, hot water can drive a cold away.
Comment  
  • Also, it is known to all that we should drink 8 bottle of water.
  • Also, it is known to all that we should drink 8 bottles of water a day.
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  • So it is active.
  • So it is active. *I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean here*
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  • In a word, we should drink more hot water.
  • In essence, we should drink more hot water. *"In essence" has a similar meaning, but I think it's more fitting here.
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People tend to forget about their health all the time (I'm one of them haha) so it's nice to have reminders like this one. Good job.
Judy
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