The first day of Spring Festival
Feb 14th 2010 14:57
Usually,the first day of Spring Festival is very bustling . But it seems to be very dull.I can't feel the atmosphere of new year.When I walked outside ,I seldom saw one person.It is quite rare.It should be very alive.If it doesn't snow ,I think I will play in the street at this time.Today we can relax ourselves.But tomorrow we will go out to make new year calls to our relatives. However ,some families don't need to go out such as mine. Because our relatives lived nearby.We live in the south of China.When it snows ,it often follows rain.It make us cold and wet.I don't like the feeling of humidity.It is very uncomfortable.Several days ago I fall off from my bike.Fortunately ,I did't hurt myself.I still remember the ridiculous sence.Many people looked at me amazing.So I don't want to go out .Just now my friend sent me a message that she invited me to KTV.I think I will spend the whole day playing the computer.
Usually,the first day of Spring Festival is very lively.
I can't feel the new year atmosphere.
When I went outside, I seldom saw anyone.
Today we can relax,
but tomorrow we will go out to make new year calls to our relatives.
However, some families such as mine don't need to go out,
because our relatives live nearby.
Several days ago I fell off my bike.
Many people looked at me amazed.
Just now my friend sent me a message inviting me to KTV.
The major problem I can see is your punctuation, but I've seen worse :)
Usually, the first day of Spring Festival is very bustling with activity.
We live in the southern part of China.
I think I will spend the whole day playing on the computer.
I'm really sorry about the festival!!! You seemed so excited about it earlier, so I hope it picks up later on. Don't mind the people who were gawking when you fell off your bike either...I fall all the time and then laugh it off haha
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