Mar 04th 2010 00:39 beanie.bop made 3 corrections for The day I went to school
I agree with まあ, connecting the smaller sentences together is something you can start practicing. Despite that, you're still doing a grea...

Feb 19th 2010 21:28 for My nephew
haha your nephew is also very cute~

Feb 19th 2010 17:51 まあ made 10 corrections for The day I went to school
How long will you stay there to study English? Anyway, you're lucky to have such a nice opportunity. Have fun!! I would say that it'...

Feb 19th 2010 16:52 Jordan made 13 corrections for The day I went to school
谢你刚的纠正，那我也纠正你的文章，呵呵， 加油阿

Feb 18th 2010 03:54 beanie.bop made 12 corrections for My nephew
Aww, he sounds like a cute kid.

Feb 15th 2010 13:05 まなみ for The first day of Spring Fes...
添削してくれてありがとうございます。 良かったら他ののお願いします。

Feb 14th 2010 21:27 beanie.bop made 3 corrections for The first day of Spring Fes...
Mad Man took care of the corrections... I'm really sorry about the festival!!! You seemed so excited about it earlier, so I hope it pi...

Feb 14th 2010 15:38 Mad Man made 10 corrections for The first day of Spring Fes...
Your English is good XD The major problem I can see is your punctuation, but I've seen worse :)

Feb 14th 2010 12:09 beanie.bop made 2 corrections for Spring Festival
I'm impressed, you did a great job writing this! I hope you enjoy your time tomorrow. My friend is Chinese and has often told me about th...

Feb 13th 2010 21:55 tohgetu for Spring Festival
Spring Festival looks so nice. I like fireworks too and I’d like to see it. Could I ask you some questions? What is the red packet? W...

Feb 13th 2010 09:26 macchan for Help!
久しく美しい子供

Feb 13th 2010 09:23 beanie.bop made 9 corrections for Look out !
People tend to forget about their health all the time (I'm one of them haha) so it's nice to have reminders like this one. Good job.

Feb 13th 2010 01:40 sunflower187 made 5 corrections for Look out !
我只修改了我会知道的。写的可以。 我感冒了。我听你的话来会试试你的方法。 我认为，作文越错越对我有帮助。 我不怕写错的。啊啊啊。 晚安`

Feb 12th 2010 23:22 tess for Help!
The name of my sister-in-low is 久美子. The names which end with "子” were popular among Japanese girl's names before. 久美子 was one of ...

Feb 12th 2010 22:34 KimuraShinichi for Help!
「久」＝久しく（hisashiku）; eternally 「美」＝美しい（utsukushii）; beautiful 「子」＝子ども（kodomo）; child It's a great name!

Feb 12th 2010 20:49 MAS for Help!
Hi! "久”means "something lasts for long time" "美" means "beauty" "子" means "child&quo...

Feb 12th 2010 16:59 beanie.bop made 6 corrections for Oh ,it's raining now.
I'm sorry about the rain, but I hope she enjoyed her birthday!

Feb 12th 2010 16:54 beanie.bop made 4 corrections for I want to make friends with...
I think you're headed in the right direction! I would love to help you with your English, if you're still looking for a friend :) Goo...

Feb 12th 2010 12:20 Judy for Oh ,it's raining now.
Thank you.It is so kind of you.

Feb 12th 2010 12:05 imanchester for Oh ,it's raining now.
happy birthday to your sister~!!

Feb 11th 2010 20:04 Gao for Oh ,it's raining now.
you come from shanghai ? happy birthday to your sister

Feb 11th 2010 09:51 Judy for Oh ,it's raining now.
Thank you.It snows today.Does it snow in shanghai？Tare care of you and do not get cold.呵呵，教你一句，冬天天气降温，你可以说“要注意防寒保暖啊”

Feb 11th 2010 04:50 sunflower187 made 5 corrections for Oh ,it's raining now.
我希望对你有所帮助。

Feb 10th 2010 14:33 YUNA for Oh ,it's raining now.
it was raining most of the way to go work.I don't like rain.It makes me upset. Enjoy your day with your family :)

Feb 10th 2010 02:17 sunflower187 made 4 corrections for I want to make friends with...
good job. Although I 'm not too much good at speaking English. I think I often could help you.

Feb 09th 2010 22:27 Pecha made 2 corrections for I want to make friends with...
good luck :)