Valentine's day of your country

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Feb 12th 2010 14:40

This is my first diary on lang-8.
Please don't hesitate to correst my English.

Valentine's day is the day after tomorrow.
Japanese valentine is the day that the women give some chocolate to the men. The woman expresses her affection to the man who she is loving.

On the other hand, In United states, The men gives flower to the women.I heard from my American friend.

And Japan has White day. White day is the day that the man give some candy and cookie to the woman.

I think this day is important for young people. Because, this day helps the girl who is loving someone.

How about your country??

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Feb 12th 2010 22:35

Valentine's day of your country
Valentine's day in your country

Please don't hesitate to correst my English.
Please don't hesitate to correct my English.

Japanese valentine is the day that the women give some chocolate to the men.
Japanese valentine is the day that the women give some chocolate to the men.or "In Japan, on Valentine's day women have to give chocolate to men"

On the other hand, In United states, The men gives flower to the women.
On the other hand, in United States, the men give flowers to the women.

White day is the day that the man give some candy and cookie to the woman.
White day is the day that the men give some candy or cookies to the women.

I think this day is important for young people.
I think Valentine's this day is important for young people.

Because, this day helps the girl who is loving someone.
Because, this day helps the girls who love someone.

"I think this day is important for young people. Because, this day helps the girl who is loving someone"

This sentence isn't correct, grammatically you can't start a sentence with "because" so this sentence needs to be changed to:

"I think this day is important to young people because it helps girls who love someone"