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World cross street

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Mitsu's latest journal entries Mar 12th 2010 16:21
Times square was like world cross street.
There were a lot of people who come from several countries.
People speak in English. Also in Spanish.
Anyway shiny ad and high buildings made us overwhelm.
Mar 12th 2010 16:30 Renée
  • English
  • French, Japanese

  • World cross street
  • World cross street Global Crossroads (or Global Town Square)
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  • Times square was like world cross street.
  • Times square was like world cross street a global crossroads.
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  • There were a lot of people who come from several countries.
  • There were a lot of people who came from several countries. (perhaps many countries? There were more than five, right?)
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  • People speak in English.
  • People speak in English.
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  • Also in Spanish.
  • Also in And Spanish.
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  • Anyway shiny ad and high buildings made us overwhelm.
  • Anyway, the shiny ads and high buildings made overwhelmed us overwhelm.
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Mar 13th 2010 04:51 quaal
  • English
  • Japanese

  • People speak in English.
  • People spoke in English and Spanish. (everything is past tense so you must continue past tense ^^ )
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I've never been there but it seems like it would be an interesting place to visit some day.
Mar 13th 2010 10:00 Mitsu
  • Japanese
  • English, Mandarin

Renée,
Thank you! I could correct my English.

quaal
Thank you! I have to consider the context.
Mar 15th 2010 19:52 華香　かこう　waheung
  • Cantonese
  • Japanese

  • Anyway shiny ad and high buildings made us overwhelm.
  • Anyway the shiny advertisement bannersand high buildings made us overwhelmed.
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Mar 16th 2010 08:24 Mitsu
  • Japanese
  • English, Mandarin

華香さん。
　thank you!
it was really shiny. it was night but like midday.
Mitsu
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  • English, Mandarin

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