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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Ryo's latest journal entries Nov 02nd 2008 13:49

I made a jack-o'-lantern yesterday.
You know it was just halloween.
Every body usually make it a few days or few weeks ago.
I was lazy, but I could buy a pumpkin at a cheap price.

My jac-o'-lantern has two faces, funny and scared.
Can you see the shadow?
Nov 02nd 2008 14:06 Ken

  • Every body usually make it a few days or few weeks ago.
  • Everybody usually makes it a few days or a few weeks ago.
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  • I was lazy, but I could buy a pumpkin at a cheap price.
  • I was lazy, but I could buy a pumpkin at a cheaper price.
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  • My jac-o'-lantern has two faces, funny and scared.
  • My jack-o'-lantern has two faces, funny and scared.
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Good English!

WOW your jack-o-lantern is really good!!
I made one a few days ago also but mine was so plain. xD
Yours is so creative!
I love it!
Especially the good idea of 2 faces!
It must have taken you a long time. =o
Nov 02nd 2008 14:28 Ryo

>Ken
Thanks alot.:D

I have improved in making it, haha.
Actually it took about 20 minutes, becaouse I used a small pumpkin.

I'll make better one next halloween more than this year.(*^^)v
Nov 03rd 2008 09:35 JapanPlz

  • Every body usually make it a few days or few weeks ago.
  • Every body usually make it a few days or few weeks ago early.
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Good job! I love how your pumpkin looks.
Nov 04th 2008 04:29 rinachan

  • I made a jack-o'-lantern yesterday.
  • I made a jack-o'-lantern yesterday,
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  • You know it was just halloween.
  • even though it was halloween. You know it was just halloween.
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  • Every body usually make it a few days or few weeks ago.
  • Every body usually makes it a few days or few weeks ahead of time.
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