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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Ryo's latest journal entries Nov 06th 2008 13:23

I went to Voncouver for 2 days.
I watched Monkey majik's concert.

I thought it was held a concert hall, but actually it was held a club.
It wasn't so big, so I could watch them very close.
Most audience were Japanese people or Japanese canadian people, because they are not popular in Canada.

I could hear some my favorite songs.
The concert was great!
Nov 06th 2008 14:02 维维
  • English
  • Mandarin, Korean

  • I thought it was held a concert hall, but actually it was held a club.
  • I thought it was held at a concert hall, but actually it was held at a club.
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  • It wasn't so big, so I could watch them very close.
  • It wasn't so big, so I couldn't watch them very close.
Comment  
  • I could hear some my favorite songs.
  • I could hear some of my favorite songs.
Comment  
Nov 06th 2008 14:04 k.rma
  • English
  • Japanese, Korean

  • I went to Voncouver for 2 days.
  • I went to Vancouver for 2 days.
Comment  
  • I thought it was held a concert hall, but actually it was held a club.
  • I thought it was held at a concert hall, but actually it was held at a club.
Comment  
  • It wasn't so big, so I could watch them very close.
  • It wasn't that big, so I was able to watch them very close.
Comment  
  • Most audience were Japanese people or Japanese canadian people, because they are not popular in Canada.
  • Most of the audience were either Japanese people or Japanese-Canadian people, because they are not popular in Canada.
Comment  
  • I could hear some my favorite songs.
  • I was able to hear some my favorite songs.
Comment  
Nov 06th 2008 14:08

"It wasn't so big, so I could watch them very close."
This sentence is correct.

What club was the concert at?
It sounds like you had fun.
Nov 06th 2008 14:13 Ken
  • English
  • Japanese

  • I went to Voncouver for 2 days.
  • I went to Vancouver for 2 days.
Comment  
  • I watched Monkey majik's concert.
  • I watched Monkey Majik's concert.
Comment  
  • I thought it was held a concert hall, but actually it was held a club.
  • I thought it would be held in a concert hall, but actually it was held in a club.
Comment  
  • Most audience were Japanese people or Japanese canadian people, because they are not popular in Canada.
  • Most of the audience were Japanese people or Japanese Canadian people, because they are not popular in Canada.
Comment  
  • I could hear some my favorite songs.
  • I could hear some of my favorite songs.
Comment  
I'm glad you had a good time! =D
I don't like really big concert places so if I were you, I'd feel even more happy. xD
It's good to hear everything went well!
Good English also. =]
Nov 06th 2008 14:40 Ryo
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  • English

>维维&Mark
Thank you for your correction!

>Betsunny
I'm not sure what it calls, but it looked like a bar.
I had a happy time.:)
By the way, your nickname is so nice!

>Ken
Thanks a lot!
I got very excited and very happy.xD
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